[Slash]

I think the "Come and talk dirty to us" quote is very unprofessional and a bit chavy to say least but like you say there's plenty of room for improvement

[ivesonswc]

This is my website www.ivesons.net i've still got to design the whole bloody thing  :

[C.C.W.C]

This is my website www.ivesons.net i've still got to design the whole bloody thing  :

'website coming soon' i like it haha

[newbroom]

Your hook line "Come an talk dirty to us" are you using that on all other marketing tools, e.g. vans, uniform, business cards, leaflets, stationery etc.

All forms of marketing / advertising should be uniform so people are aware of your brand. In itself there is not much wrong with your hook line, its different and you want to stand out from the crowd.

Cheers Mark.

[formb]

This is my website www.ivesons.net i've still got to design the whole bloody thing  :

I'd put where you operate on there.....

[formb]

I think the "Come and talk dirty to us" quote is very unprofessional and a bit chavy to say least but like you say there's plenty of room for improvement

I'd disagree with that.

I think it stands out from the usual boring pun about panes etc.

I have seen other interesting memory hooks:

Builder: Satisfaction guaranteed with every erection!

Decorating service: Get well plastered!

It is a memory hook and if you remember it then it has served it's purpose. 

[ivesonswc]

hi

the website will have all that info on the splash page is just temp i am designing the proper website at the moment and will take me ages though to do so thats why i uploaded the splash page

thanks for the input though

[Gav Camm lammy 283]

http://www.crystal-clear-window-cleaning-services.co.uk/home

This is our site and its totally free.Weve still got photos to put up..
Feedback appreciated...

noticed on yr site you clean up to 50ft wfp
n quote "no job to big " u cud struggle on a 6 storey office block in preston then
 

lammy just coz u struggle on a normal house with ur flexi streamline pole that i used for conservatories!!!

no struggle 4 me fella got no end ov poles
at my disposal they r all locked in yr van lol lol

[Moderator David@stives]

tags are outdated and might even hamper the search

[The Jester of Wibbly]

red is angry on a website

[ivesonswc]

just launched my website decided to spend some time on the computer and got it done still needs fine tunning though

[C.C.W.C]

just launched my website decided to spend some time on the computer and got it done still needs fine tunning though

looks good