[R.V.A Window Cleaning Services]

Should read, We Provide a professional, reliable & fully insured etc etc

[R.V.A Window Cleaning Services]

Established  in 2005 We

Small w for we

The web site looks really good

[chris@c.m.s]

All sorted thanks again.

[AuRavelling79]

Under pure water technology

1. "it's" not "its"

2. IMO instead of "been considered, and now The Water Fed ..." should be "been considered. The Water Fed..." (Because of "now" in the "Law now states")

3. capital "O" for "only."

4. should read "conservatories" (plural) not "conservatory's" (belonging to or part of the conservatory). Small "t" for "Third floor", "etc" for "ect".

5. IMO - it is not the method that often neglects the frames, it is the person, consider re-wording.

On the home page:-

It should be a comma after West Sussex, not a full stop.

...within an 9 mile distance... should be a 9 mile distance

IMO - after area, (comma)  should be area; (semi-colon)

We tend to focus... (I would change this to "Our main focus is on" - because you used tend in the previous statement)

Missing comma after "small commercial properties" and put a semi colon after "shop fronts"

[magic1]

Like it  hard to spot the amn in the m.

[Window Washers]

site is looking good, I personally would change the location page. I would put your address on the contacts page and make the location page the areas that you cover as it seems a waste to have 2 pages for your contact details.

You defo need to look at your seo as people that do not know your webite adress will not find it very easily at the moment.

Ian

[chris@c.m.s]

Thanks Malc will try and get that lot sorted tonight.

Magic 1 There isn't a lot I can do about the logo unfortunately the website building program changes the size of it and it loses some of its clarity it looks good on the polo necks though   

Thanks Ian will be looking again at the pages during the week its still very much work in progress 
I must admit I'm a little lost with getting it noticed but the host has told me it will be a while before the search engines except the site, there are some optimising tools on site I can use Do I need to use them before it accepted?

[Window Washers]

Thanks Malc will try and get that lot sorted tonight.

Magic 1 There isn't a lot I can do about the logo unfortunately the website building program changes the size of it and it loses some of its clarity it looks good on the polo necks though   

Thanks Ian will be looking again at the pages during the week its still very much work in progress 
I must admit I'm a little lost with getting it noticed but the host has told me it will be a while before the search engines except the site, there are some optimising tools on site I can use Do I need to use them before it accepted?

there are quite a few tricks to get on quicker, linking to the right sites and having a link to you can get you where you want to be quicker, link to every tom dick and harry and it may get you on at top soon to be dropped saying that from experience. I do not know what the optimising tools are so I cannot comment on that side.

As I said before I feel it is a waste the location when could be used for a far better reason that would help you a lot. You are doing great so far