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derek west

Re: pedantic people wanted, apply with in
« Reply #40 on: February 15, 2009, 07:15:50 pm »
not added the special offers yet, doing that tomorrow. so at the mo theres only one.

it will all be checked and corrected tomoz.

hopefully

derek
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Ricky M

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Re: pedantic people wanted, apply with in
« Reply #41 on: February 15, 2009, 07:24:32 pm »
Its LOOKS well , Like the use of the contrasting colours , the pink-yes nice touch , different it is and I think thats most important issue , just IMO the main picture at the bottom needs fine tuning
ses he with out a web site
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www.ability1975.co.uk
                          www.carpetcleaninguttoxeter.co.uk  
              NCCA !? but why have non of my clients herd of them ??

Steve Chapman

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Re: pedantic people wanted, apply with in
« Reply #42 on: February 15, 2009, 07:27:10 pm »
a good site, though to rank highly you probably need more search keywords peppered in the text on

each page, especially areas you cover, this will make it far more relevant when people search those

terms

regards
steve
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richie

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Re: pedantic people wanted, apply with in
« Reply #43 on: February 15, 2009, 07:35:19 pm »
Derek,

State-of-the-art £50,000 Van Mounted Cleaning System. Powered by a massive 1.6 litre fuel injected engine

You must have had your Boxxer TM built to your own specs.  I also think that at £50,000 you have been taken for a mug.  You paid way to much. :o

What happens if someone wants to see the 1.6 litre fuel injected engine???

Richie.
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derek west

Re: pedantic people wanted, apply with in
« Reply #44 on: February 15, 2009, 07:53:51 pm »
ritchie
i did tell mark when i saw this on my web site and he just said who doesn't exagerate.

lets face it, how many web sites say they have the best equipment going.
 

ps... if you add up all my investment in this business, i wouldn't get much change from 50k so that bits true ish. ;D

derek
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Mike Osbourne

Re: pedantic people wanted, apply with in
« Reply #45 on: February 15, 2009, 08:01:33 pm »
Derek

I would change it.

It's very specific and you don't really need to lie to make your point about your equipment. What if a jealous competitor reorted you to trading standards and you ended up i the local paper?
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derek west

Re: pedantic people wanted, apply with in
« Reply #46 on: February 15, 2009, 08:06:42 pm »
what cc is my boxxer? i know its 21 HP but not sure what engine size is.
derek
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daysdeepclean

Re: pedantic people wanted, apply with in
« Reply #47 on: February 15, 2009, 08:13:33 pm »
Does any other profession stipulate how much their equipment is worth? Dereks certainly isn't the first C/C to mention how much the equipment's worth! You're perhaps opening yourself up to the thieving scum bags that won't think twice about knicking your van and selling the lot for a ridiculous price.....

Or worse still, a jealous C/C who only has a porty ::) ::) ::)

Just a thought Derek, not an envious stab ;D ;D ;D
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derek west

Re: pedantic people wanted, apply with in
« Reply #48 on: February 15, 2009, 08:16:33 pm »
the drivers seats wired up to the mains so they might get a shock if they try. ;D
fitted with a tracker mate. taking no chances with my livlihood.
derek
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daysdeepclean

Re: pedantic people wanted, apply with in
« Reply #49 on: February 15, 2009, 08:19:37 pm »
Bugger ;D ;D ;D
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Joe H

Re: pedantic people wanted, apply with in
« Reply #50 on: February 15, 2009, 08:49:52 pm »
Quote from: Derek West on February 15, 2009, 08:06:42 pm
what cc is my boxxer? i know its 21 HP but not sure what engine size is.
derek

My 18hp engine is about 550cc so your 21hp is would guess at being 750cc max
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derek west

Re: pedantic people wanted, apply with in
« Reply #51 on: February 15, 2009, 08:55:56 pm »
cheers joe

so not far off a 1.6 then ;D
derek
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clinton

Re: pedantic people wanted, apply with in
« Reply #52 on: February 15, 2009, 09:00:35 pm »
Derek

Its as nearly as fast as your old capri ;D
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derek west

Re: pedantic people wanted, apply with in
« Reply #53 on: February 15, 2009, 09:08:29 pm »
you mean my 2.8 injection special with pepper pot alloys. ;D
derek
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Tony Gill Carpet Smart

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Re: pedantic people wanted, apply with in
« Reply #54 on: February 15, 2009, 09:13:00 pm »
Simitar GTE 3 litre essex lump wolfrace slot mags mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm for me ::)
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robert meldrum

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Re: pedantic people wanted, apply with in
« Reply #55 on: February 15, 2009, 10:23:29 pm »
Derek

1600 divided by 750 = ?

So it's less than half the size of a 1600
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derek west

Re: pedantic people wanted, apply with in
« Reply #56 on: February 15, 2009, 10:24:50 pm »
hence the smiley face on my tongue in cheek post robert.
derek
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clinton

Re: pedantic people wanted, apply with in
« Reply #57 on: February 15, 2009, 10:42:40 pm »
Derek

You will just have to put its larger than a portie  ;D
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richie

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Re: pedantic people wanted, apply with in
« Reply #58 on: February 15, 2009, 10:57:37 pm »
Briggs & stratton Vanguard V-TWIN Air Cooled Engines


16hp                480cc
18hp                570cc
21hp & 23hp      627cc
27hp                752cc
35hp                993cc

Richie.
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Mike Osbourne

Re: pedantic people wanted, apply with in
« Reply #59 on: February 15, 2009, 11:00:22 pm »
There was a thread ages ago and Dave Liahona posted the HM caparison between the Spitfire and a high end portie, this is where the 20x the power line came from, or prompted it.

So you could quite reasonably say that.

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