[michael papworth]

I'd decided to have a day off today and redesigned my flyer:

[Clive McDonald]

That's much better. Very good visualy.

I still think you should make it plainer that you are a window cleaner.Ie this is your primary service.


Also, people very much like to see a name on a leaflet, if your name really is wally say so. (wally smith proprietor).

[elite mike]

looks good to me wally

how do you find the time ,to do all those things

mike

[windowwashers]

that is looking loads better.


I will give my opinion on a few changes use them or dont it's up to you.

email address: can you not use something like services@wally-w-----w---.co.uk looks a lot better than using a free email address.
on front of flyer web missing (office mobile email (your website is important)

have you thought about registering the domain name with out all the -'s and pointing it to your site ?

Ian

[windowwashers]

that is looking loads better.


I will give my opinion on a few changes use them or dont it's up to you.

email address: can you not use something like services@wally-w-----w---.co.uk looks a lot better than using a free email address.
on front of flyer web missing (office mobile email (your website is important)

have you thought about registering the domain name with out all the -'s and pointing it to your site ? all them -'s is making your site hard to remember

Ian