[TVCS]

Just got our proof through and was wondering what you guys think. 

The van is AA yellow, not as day-glow as the proof looks.
  All comments greatfully received.

[TVCS]

Points awarded for who can guess what tin of beer I was drinking when I came up with the logo.

[elite mike]

looks pretty good to me ,,
xxxx

[elite mike]

those are not kisses by the way 
 oh god its boddintons
got it in the end,how many points do i get
mike

[cvdewsbury]

yr bulletin points look too small maybe you have too many...think about condensing them but apart from that A1.

[Davo]

Maybe rethink the colour of the bullet points too, they look hard to read.


Good luck


Mark

[Paul Coleman]

Maybe rethink the colour of the bullet points too, they look hard to read.


Good luck


Mark

I second that.  Green on yellow isn't a good combination for readability IMO - even if it is AA yellow.  Yellow and blue contrast quite well and maybe even yellow and black.

[windowwashers]

did you see the istockphoto on your water drop ?

and maybe bold font for the things you want to stick out as at the mo it seems the otherway round.

apart from them little bits looks ok  better than not having a van sign written IMO 

[TVCS]

The istockphoto wording won't be on the finished item I have been told. 

I quite like the green lettering, but will have a think about maybe a blue instead.   And as for the bullet points, we have already reduced them a couple of times and those are the main points I want to advertise.

Thanks for the imput and comments, much appreciated. 

Elite mike, well done.  10 points.  and thanks for the kisses

[Mr H]

Looks good m8... Also think about getting the van colour coded. Costs about £400 but makes it stand out a lot more.

Regards
Mr H

[elite mike]

The istockphoto wording won't be on the finished item I have been told. 

I quite like the green lettering, but will have a think about maybe a blue instead.   And as for the bullet points, we have already reduced them a couple of times and those are the main points I want to advertise.

Thanks for the imput and comments, much appreciated. 

Elite mike, well done.  10 points.  and thanks for the kisses

lol
 at first i thought it was castlemain xxxx
then the truth hit me 

[dave0123]

Maybe making your telephone numbers a litttle more bolder??

[RO-Sheen]

Very good but I would put 'window cleaning' in bigger bolder writing somewhere. Remember, you want people to know what your business is as soon as they see your van and not have to read it.
Thats the mistake I made.
If I saw your van on the road I would firstly think you were office cleaners.

[ok cleaning]

looks good to me

[eddie d]

 

[poleman]

High reach pure water! nope! us WC will know put joe public! 

[chris@c.m.s]

Very good but I would put 'window cleaning' in bigger bolder writing somewhere. Remember, you want people to know what your business is as soon as they see your van and not have to read it.
Thats the mistake I made.
If I saw your van on the road I would firstly think you were office cleaners.

Completely agree make it obvious what the bigger bulk of your business is.

[TennetClean]

I think the sign writing is fine but I really dont like the van colour to be honest.

[Londoner]

Very good but I would put 'window cleaning' in bigger bolder writing somewhere. Remember, you want people to know what your business is as soon as they see your van and not have to read it.
Thats the mistake I made.
If I saw your van on the road I would firstly think you were office cleaners.

Yes, I thought that as well.

[TVCS]

I think the sign writing is fine but I really dont like the van colour to be honest.

The van itself isn't this shade of yellow,  it is an ex AA van  and so it isn't this bright.  The same colour as a tin of Boddingtons funnily enough.

Will think about putting window cleaning in a bolder font, maybe. 

Thanks for comments, keep em coming