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D.Salkeld_Ltd

  • Posts: 951
Re: Web Site??
« Reply #40 on: March 12, 2008, 06:34:22 pm »
OK Folks,

Done a few alterations.

What do you think now??

I like it even better ;D ;D

David
Not Perfect - But Honest

gary999

  • Posts: 8156
Re: Web Site??
« Reply #41 on: March 12, 2008, 08:04:43 pm »
looks good nice photos although the one on the home page
is a bit scarey ;D ;D

Jimmy1

  • Posts: 289
Re: Web Site??
« Reply #42 on: March 12, 2008, 09:14:38 pm »
It looks great! I like your photo too, really freindly looking. I'm sure this will help you lots. Well done! Let us know how it goes?

groundhog

  • Posts: 1806
Re: Web Site??
« Reply #43 on: March 12, 2008, 10:45:54 pm »
Wow!!! I've just checked out your website, and what an improvement, it is now really good, and looks really professional! I particuarly like the new slogan 'Good Honest Service' If I lived in your area I would definately want you to be my window cleaner!
If I had to find fault, I would say that the bit on the home page below your phone number were it starts 'Louth' needs to be centered with the paragraph above, if that makes sense as it is slightly off to the left which makes it look a bit lop sided. Apart from that I think its great!!! :)

darren73

  • Posts: 290
Re: Web Site??
« Reply #44 on: March 12, 2008, 10:53:44 pm »
nice website bigboots ;D-good idea putting the garage doors in,do you do many?

L.J.Thorpe

  • Posts: 2056
Re: Web Site??
« Reply #45 on: March 12, 2008, 10:59:03 pm »
Dave ,thats really looking good now mate :),must admit i thought it was a bit clunky first time i viewed it but its amazing what a difference small changes make,good honest straightforward and smart without being flashy or putting the competition down ;D

steven ainger

  • Posts: 1953
Re: Web Site??
« Reply #46 on: March 12, 2008, 11:11:09 pm »
its looking alot better now, and its inspired me to start doing mine, and i can see that it is a work in progress type of thing untill you get i right

ste k

  • Posts: 13
Re: Web Site??
« Reply #47 on: March 13, 2008, 09:58:23 am »
on the home page...change the word :

trustworthyness for trustworthy.

on thw WFP page, there are the following spelling errors:

virtualy...virtually
disolved...dissolved
natrualy...naturally
detergants...detergents
realy...really

Dean Aspects

  • Posts: 1786
Re: Web Site??
« Reply #48 on: March 13, 2008, 02:40:38 pm »
I like your site it comes across the same way you do on here as a down to earth aproachable likeable bloke we need more people like you around

Dean

Dale Smith

  • Posts: 491
Re: Web Site??
« Reply #49 on: March 13, 2008, 07:14:51 pm »
David, you have used the forum well, as from the comments you are improving your web site all the time, which should bring you more money  ;)
Your pic on the home page is definately a little scary though  :D
Swindon, Wiltshire.

groundhog

  • Posts: 1806
Re: Web Site??
« Reply #50 on: March 13, 2008, 08:44:47 pm »

Your pic on the home page is definately a little scary though  :D

Whats wrong with David's photo? I like it, he looks friendly and aproachable, just the kind of bloke most people would like to have as their window cleaner!! :)

brightnclean

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Re: Web Site??
« Reply #51 on: March 13, 2008, 08:46:42 pm »

Whats wrong with David's photo? I like it, he looks friendly and aproachable, just the kind of bloke most people would like to have as their window cleaner!! :)

Or bouncer at a real rough nightclub  lol  :)

groundhog

  • Posts: 1806
Re: Web Site??
« Reply #52 on: March 13, 2008, 09:00:39 pm »
I think that he looks a bit like Fabio Capello!!  ;D

L.J.Thorpe

  • Posts: 2056
Re: Web Site??
« Reply #53 on: March 13, 2008, 09:27:50 pm »

Your pic on the home page is definately a little scary though  :D

Whats wrong with David's photo? I like it, he looks friendly and aproachable, just the kind of bloke most people would like to have as their window cleaner!! :)
i agree ,thats a much better photo than the avatar one dave (no offence ;) ) the new one is a big improvement,and your website has made me determined to get one up and running asap(no way i would put my photo on it tho,kiss of death with my face)