Thank you Darrenlee. A lot of cleaners dont like the way it is written and set up but it works for me. It was commented on that it would scare a lot of people away and not want my services.
Good that was the whole idea of the way it is.
I was also slated with the way it was written and that I should have had a "proper" company write it. With me writing it though it is as I would say things anyway.
Again, it works for me and it is being looked at by people that I want to see it. I dont care about the looky loos, thats what leaflets and yellow pages are for. I know they both work its just I dont want the clients that come from that type of advertising.
Best, Dave.