Thoughts on this please. This will be the first text i send out to customers. I will be sending letters out first, then texts about 1/2 months after. For those who dont know, i dont do the physical cleaning in my business anymore due to health, so i rarely get to see the customers in person.
Text"Hi, we have introduced a new flexible Direct Debit payment system which we are finding makes keeping upto date with payments on our end much easier and also benefits our customers too, as they no longer have to look around the house for cash/cheque or go to a cash machine prior to clean, and for those who pay online it saves you the hassle of having to remember to pay us after each clean which can be easily forgotten.
All you need to do is go to our website at -
www.quantumshine.co.ukThen click the blue button on our website that says “Pay with GOCARDLESS”
Once you have done this simply fill in the form with your details to setup the Direct Debit. It takes only a few minutes. If for any reason you have a problem setting it up we can simply setup the direct debit for you over the phone.
Payment is then taking automatically only after each clean. Payment will take 3-5 days to reach our account after the clean. You will receive an email notifying of when the payment will be taken.
Direct Debit can be cancelled at any time, and to confirm payment is only taken after each clean. So if you ever you miss out a clean, payment will not be processed.
25% off your next clean if you setup GoCardless Direct Debit with us before November 2019.
Many Thanks
Josh Quantum Shine Window Cleaning"
What do you all think? Too long? I want to shorten it, but i also like to give out all the facts and i think my text explains everything.