[nathankaye]

Just toying with some ideas of an introductory video for my facebook page or main web site as videos have a greater success rate of viewings.
Yes im wearing shades n some clients think i look like im on S.W.A.T team, which is good for making them pay when i come a knocking 
Plus you can get another look at my ugly mug if you choose to watch,

https://youtu.be/0ILycB-DHks

[֍Winp®oClean֍]

Little dissapointed Nath, I was expecting a "eyup" rather than "hello" 

[nathankaye]

 

Little dissapointed Nath, I was expecting a "eyup" rather than "hello" 

Aye, know what ya mean.
 

[GAZZA B]

i think it would be better without the dark glasses, customers won't like that

[Soupy]

Turn your phone round the right way.

[jk999]

😂😂😂😂😂🤣🤣🤣😅😅😅you need to do another one for first thirty secs video quality wasn't very good and also I would do away with the sunglasses aswell 👍

[swanson]

I thought it was really good mate

[Stoots]

Bit posher than I imagined you being.

Lose the glasses, camera work was shaky and poor lighting. Practice your script so. It flows it was a bit jerky and the fake smiles you kept trying to pull looked awkward.

Good effort  but could be improves

[duncan h]

Dump the specs

[nathankaye]

Cheers for the feedback.
It was a little awkward, i was parked in a public carpark at cusworth park, local to where i work. I noticed people who were originally walking their dogs just standing and watching.

I will loose the glasses when doing the official video, i was quite tired and my eyes showed it. So thought for the trial run just to wear them.
But general vibe is the video is a good idea.

[duncan h]

Try it. Nothing to lose

[8weekly]

Definitely keep the glasses. I think a false beard would help. Just to make sure no one you know recognises you.






Kidding. It's fine other than a little awkward.

[G Griffin]

I will loose the glasses when doing the official video,

I'd keep the glasses if it's going to be an official video.
It's good to look cool like one of those rappers and appeal to a younger clientele.
You could be like a Yorkshire Honey G.
Honey G By Gum.

[8weekly]

I will loose the glasses when doing the official video,

I'd keep the glasses if it's going to be an official video.
It's good to look cool like one of those rappers and appeal to a younger clientele.
You could be like a Yorkshire Honey G.
Honey G By Gum.

Should it not be Honey E by gum?

[G Griffin]

I will loose the glasses when doing the official video,

I'd keep the glasses if it's going to be an official video.
It's good to look cool like one of those rappers and appeal to a younger clientele.
You could be like a Yorkshire Honey G.
Honey G By Gum.

Should it not be Honey E by gum?

That works better there isn't a Honey E.
I'm going to have a look at the unofficial video anyway.

[Pete Thompson]

i like the idea.  Customers get to see what you're like etc not some thug.

Sunglasses look ridiculous though.  Maybe you're trying to cover a black eye?

[G Griffin]

"Competitive fees, which I charge....." is waffle, Honey G........I mean, Nathan.
And I'd lose the "hope you're feeling ok" bit too.

[G Griffin]

i like the idea.  Customers get to see what you're like etc not some thug.

Sunglasses look ridiculous though.  Maybe you're trying to cover a black eye?

Make your mind up.
And you shouldn't judge a book by it's cover.
Who'd have thought Nathan would be so camp?

[8weekly]

"Competitive fees, which I charge....." is waffle, Honey G........I mean, Nathan.
And I'd lose the "hope you're feeling ok" bit too.

He needs a rap. I've come up with the first verse:

So you’re looking for a windy that gets yo’ glass real clean,
Well look no further because I’ll make yours sheen.
But I don’t stop there , no I’m the real deal,
Because I also clean up both your frames and sills.

[nathankaye]

Could rap to a child theme song;

I am a windoe cleaner
I come from far away
I come to clean your wimdows
I clean them every day

I like to clean your windows
I clean them really good
Just say that magic word and
I'll clean of all that crud


Lol....camp......one of the things i learnt in sales a while ago. For some reason the softer approach works better for selling.
You dont come over as a thug then.