[robbo333]

Not bad at all. It does need a little read (depending on how correct you want it), e.g. 'Making just about any buildings gutters accessible where scaffolding might otherwise be required.' would be better with a semi colon before 'Making', rather than a new sentence. (i'm not even sure that is a sentence). Also 'buildings gutters' is buildings' gutters, stick an apostrophe in after the 's'.

I would prefer to see a colour pic on the front and something that is more obviously gutter cleaning; maybe close in a bit on the pic. It took me about 2 secs to work out what that pic was about and for me that's too long.

Quite a bit of repetition on the site, that could possibly be condensed. Less is more.

I would sell sizzle rather than the sausage, e.g. rather than your heading 'IPAF' (which is ok) I would have 'We can clean, clear and survey almost any building up to 70 feet'.

Not much on there for high-end residential, e.g. do you cover the whole of London? Can you clean my gutters within a week? Do I have to be in when you clean? The access to the rear of my property is not good, is this a problem?

Also not much about yourself, quality of staff, quality of service a nice bit of smelly bullcrap.

Hope that's helpful.

Robbo

[Tosh]

Not bad at all. It does need a little read (depending on how correct you want it), e.g. 'Making just about any buildings gutters accessible where scaffolding might otherwise be required.' would be better with a semi colon before 'Making', rather than a new sentence. (i'm not even sure that is a sentence). Also 'buildings gutters' is buildings' gutters, stick an apostrophe in after the 's'.

I would prefer to see a colour pic on the front and something that is more obviously gutter cleaning; maybe close in a bit on the pic. It took me about 2 secs to work out what that pic was about and for me that's too long.

Quite a bit of repetition on the site, that could possibly be condensed. Less is more.

I would sell sizzle rather than the sausage, e.g. rather than your heading 'IPAF' (which is ok) I would have 'We can clean, clear and survey almost any building up to 70 feet'.

Not much on there for high-end residential, e.g. do you cover the whole of London? Can you clean my gutters within a week? Do I have to be in when you clean? The access to the rear of my property is not good, is this a problem?

Also not much about yourself, quality of staff, quality of service a nice bit of smelly bullcrap.

Hope that's helpful.

Robbo

Useful, thanks. Its all smelly bullcrap so far

Its really just a draft version and I know there always room for expansion, I'll use your pointers, thanks.

[Michael H Jones]

Shouldn't it be a possessive apostrophe, so "building's gutters"?? May well be wrong, but it's how I read it....

[8weekly]

Shouldn't it be a possessive apostrophe, so "building's gutters"?? May well be wrong, but it's how I read it....

It's plural though. But I must admit I get a little confused around this area.

[Splash & dash]

Looks good and professional, easy to use , not overly complicated, everyone will have there own idear of how they would have it , but from a potential customers point of view it looks professional and you know what you are doing . Only thing I didn't like was the section about staff complaints I felt it could give the impression you are expecting a complaint. Ime sure you will get a lot of work from it .

[Tosh]

Yes, I know what you mean about staff complaints. I'm going to delete that bit.

[kevinquinn]

Give it your best, go on, I can take it

http://guttercleanlondon.co.uk

I like it. The only thing I would change is the blog roll.  I wouldn't have any of those links under blog roll. I've not looked at it on a mobile. Is it optimised for mobile? If so, I would make the telephone number clickable.

[Tosh]

Thanks. Two edits implemented.

[Arnold Palmer]

Do you get many people logging in?

[Arnold Palmer]

Your payment page refers to window cleaning, is that intentional?

[Tosh]

Thanks Soupy, sorted.