[nathankaye]

In process of designing my web page. Not interested in commercial work. Been there cleaning kids care homes and found it to be cut throat.
So after 14yrs iv finally got round to doing a web page esp as expanding my services.
Its only my first draft and have to include service details etc but interested in some feedback please as some guys on here have great web pages.
Thanks in advance
http://Http://1NKServices.co.uk
And best in desktop view if using tablet or phone. Well at moment anyway

[lal]

In process of designing my web page. Not interested in commercial work. Been there cleaning kids care homes and found it to be cut throat.
So after 14yrs iv finally got round to doing a web page esp as expanding my services.
Its only my first draft and have to include service details etc but interested in some feedback please as some guys on here have great web pages.
Thanks in advance
http://Http://1NKServices.co.uk
And best in desktop view if using tablet or phone. Well at moment anyway

Hi Nathankaye, your link to web page won't open on my computer.
Lal

[nathankaye]

Sorry just noticed, its copied two http://

www.1NKServices.co.uk

[Clever Forum Name]

It's not responsive so looks a mess on my iPad Pro.

Apart from that Looking good so far however the pictures where they taken with a Nokia 3210?

[nathankaye]

It does need to be modified on the smart phone or tablet as mentioned in my first post. As im concentrating on desktop access first and then addressing other.
 As far as pic concern, thats just dam cheeky   

[Clever Forum Name]

Some appear to be ok, others don't lol. It's not the device used to take the picture it's the zooming and editing.

And 

[Clever Forum Name]

iPad Pro has a screen size of 12.9 so that's basically coming on for laptop sized screens hence why I thought I would mention it. But looks like you have that covered.

Seems to be fixed now 

[Clever Forum Name]

Under testimonials you have a link to someone's personal account. Are they ok with that?

It's no different than leaving a review on FB. Might be worth checking with Bev.

[nathankaye]

Cheers for constant feedback as it helps perfect and fine tune.
In relation to tablet n phones i have another option which im working on soon which modifies it for such devices as it uses slightly different options as you may already be aware, ie mobile friendly viewing etc
Just hope it works

[Clever Forum Name]

Glad you see it as feedback and not criticism

Interesting pic of trad vs wfp Ladder vs pole. I like that idea  

[paul22]

Nathankaye website looks good.  What site did you use to build your website and did you find it easy? Hope it brings new work in!

[nathankaye]

Nathankaye website looks good.  What site did you use to build your website and did you find it easy? Hope it brings new work in!

Good old vistaprint and its relatively easy just very time consuming.

[sunshine windows]

I would remove the picture of the ladder, as I couldn't be arsed reading all the text (too much in my opinion) and it looks like this is how you operate.

[nathankaye]

I would remove the picture of the ladder, as I couldn't be arsed reading all the text (too much in my opinion) and it looks like this is how you operate.

Was u viewing it on a mobile device? If so im tweeking that shortly as u may be aware how a page reacts to desk top viewing is different to mobile friendly viewing. Tonight or tomoro im going to play with that aspect to sort these niggles out.
Cheers 4 feedback tho

[sunshine windows]

Yes on mobile. Loads of text then a dodgy ladder pic is one of the first images you see

[sunshine windows]

Just a thought. Perhaps put a Red Cross through the picture. Or a tick next to the wfp pic and a cross next to the ladder pic.

[AuRavelling79]

Nice. Maybe a bit less wordy?

Lots of spelling and grammar errors. Get yer missus to proof read it.

The title says "14 year" instead of "14 years".

One of the main pictures has "slipery" instead of "slippery".

I've looked no further but if that is at the very start it doesn't bode well.

[Tosh]

Nathankaye website looks good.  What site did you use to build your website and did you find it easy? Hope it brings new work in!

Good old vistaprint and its relatively easy just very time consuming.

You'll have google issues most likely using vista print. Use a recognised hosting provider as Google views sites hosted on unprofessional servers as second rate. So I believe.

[nathankaye]

Nice. Maybe a bit less wordy?

Lots of spelling and grammar errors. Get yer missus to proof read it.

The title says "14 year" instead of "14 years".

One of the main pictures has "slipery" instead of "slippery".

I've looked no further but if that is at the very start it doesn't bode well.

Yes, im aware of the grammer issues. I was typing it early hrs in morning and i suppose i shud have corrected it before asking for opinions, but ive not had time to go back on yet. Good job im only running it past all you guys before i start to promote it.

[nathankaye]

Thanks for all feedback on it. Alot will need addressing. Especially grammer and amount of txt.
Interesting point slack bladder, i might have to check that out.