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Klean07

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kkleanwindowcleaning.co.uk

tonycarr

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Re: New website! Is there something missing or is it just me?
« Reply #1 on: February 11, 2016, 10:20:45 pm »
after a quick look

the payments page looks still under construction?

on the contact page would have thought there would be space for Address?

tony  ;)
T & J Window Cleaning services

johnny bravo

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Re: New website! Is there something missing or is it just me?
« Reply #2 on: February 11, 2016, 10:30:32 pm »
designer slazenger gear i see ;D ;D,  no expense spared ;D :D

johnny bravo

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Re: New website! Is there something missing or is it just me?
« Reply #3 on: February 11, 2016, 10:31:38 pm »
looks a bit bland,    stick some pics in ,  brighten it up

jonboywalton75

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Re: New website! Is there something missing or is it just me?
« Reply #4 on: February 11, 2016, 10:41:02 pm »
No health  and safety  risks with wfp??????

AuRavelling79

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Re: New website! Is there something missing or is it just me?
« Reply #5 on: February 11, 2016, 10:56:33 pm »
Since you asked ...

Could do with a proof read and grammar check.

Too much waffle.
It's a game of three halves!

Klean07

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Re: New website! Is there something missing or is it just me?
« Reply #6 on: February 12, 2016, 07:53:21 am »
Some interesting points thanks
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David Deer

Re: New website! Is there something missing or is it just me?
« Reply #7 on: February 12, 2016, 10:26:44 am »
The homepage has a very large upper third which contains a lot of blank space around the animated module. I would shrink it by a third (or move it below the main module or even remove it altogether) and make the phone numbers much larger with the home and mobile numbers centred on separate lines for ease of viewing.
The blurb is light grey but would achieve better contrast if black so readers with poorer eyesight can read it more easily.
Personally I would lose the payment page and remove the testimonials page until you actually have some!
To avoid spam get rid of you email address from the website and install a captcha api on the web form.
The font seems a bit thin and the word soffit on the first page shows the problem with creative fonts.
There is no meta tag for description, author,content, language. All of which will help your google rankings. The title has a divider bar in it which may act as a stop tag for web spiders. The title doesn't really say much about the service you offer and should be more content oriented.
Maybe a google map on the contact page and the google tracking api on the website just to bump up the ranking a little.
As an Ajax site written for word-press it has a nice clean feel and is easy to navigate. The main module with the animated slide show is really nice, the images are great and really should be the focus of the page not knocked down to the lower 2/3rds.
The what we do stuff is nice but each article terminates with a [..] which would suggest that there is more. However it would seem there isn't as there is no link to the rest of the text even when it says "read more".
The services section places a lot of emphasis on the health and safety but doesn't actually outline the benefits of wfp.
Just some things to think about as the site develops.

robbo333

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Re: New website! Is there something missing or is it just me?
« Reply #8 on: February 12, 2016, 03:38:30 pm »
That pic you've used of the blade is a stock pic (I used it years ago on an old website and leaflets etc).
Make sure you've purchased it properly or they will fine you. A mate of mine had all sorts of grief a while ago with a similar problem. Wouldn't want to see it happen to you.
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Klean07

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Re: New website! Is there something missing or is it just me?
« Reply #9 on: February 13, 2016, 08:16:12 am »
The homepage has a very large upper third which contains a lot of blank space around the animated module. I would shrink it by a third (or move it below the main module or even remove it altogether) and make the phone numbers much larger with the home and mobile numbers centred on separate lines for ease of viewing.
The blurb is light grey but would achieve better contrast if black so readers with poorer eyesight can read it more easily.
Personally I would lose the payment page and remove the testimonials page until you actually have some!
To avoid spam get rid of you email address from the website and install a captcha api on the web form.
The font seems a bit thin and the word soffit on the first page shows the problem with creative fonts.
There is no meta tag for description, author,content, language. All of which will help your google rankings. The title has a divider bar in it which may act as a stop tag for web spiders. The title doesn't really say much about the service you offer and should be more content oriented.
Maybe a google map on the contact page and the google tracking api on the website just to bump up the ranking a little.
As an Ajax site written for word-press it has a nice clean feel and is easy to navigate. The main module with the animated slide show is really nice, the images are great and really should be the focus of the page not knocked down to the lower 2/3rds.
The what we do stuff is nice but each article terminates with a [..] which would suggest that there is more. However it would seem there isn't as there is no link to the rest of the text even when it says "read more".
The services section places a lot of emphasis on the health and safety but doesn't actually outline the benefits of wfp.
Just some things to think about as the site develops.
Thanks a million for that David I very much appreciate your feedback.
kkleanwindowcleaning.co.uk

Klean07

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Re: New website! Is there something missing or is it just me?
« Reply #10 on: February 14, 2016, 07:55:55 pm »
The homepage has a very large upper third which contains a lot of blank space around the animated module. I would shrink it by a third (or move it below the main module or even remove it altogether) and make the phone numbers much larger with the home and mobile numbers centred on separate lines for ease of viewing.
The blurb is light grey but would achieve better contrast if black so readers with poorer eyesight can read it more easily.
Personally I would lose the payment page and remove the testimonials page until you actually have some!
To avoid spam get rid of you email address from the website and install a captcha api on the web form.
The font seems a bit thin and the word soffit on the first page shows the problem with creative fonts.
There is no meta tag for description, author,content, language. All of which will help your google rankings. The title has a divider bar in it which may act as a stop tag for web spiders. The title doesn't really say much about the service you offer and should be more content oriented.
Maybe a google map on the contact page and the google tracking api on the website just to bump up the ranking a little.
As an Ajax site written for word-press it has a nice clean feel and is easy to navigate. The main module with the animated slide show is really nice, the images are great and really should be the focus of the page not knocked down to the lower 2/3rds.
The what we do stuff is nice but each article terminates with a [..] which would suggest that there is more. However it would seem there isn't as there is no link to the rest of the text even when it says "read more".
The services section places a lot of emphasis on the health and safety but doesn't actually outline the benefits of wfp.
Just some things to think about as the site develops.
Hello again David, Website guy has tweaked some of the changes that you pointed out so could you have another look then let me know what you think of it now plus any changes that still need to be done.
Thanks in advance.
kkleanwindowcleaning.co.uk