O is for ORANGE! not for the number ZERO!
oh oh eight oh.
i lost count how many times she said "bronze aluminium window frame". well done to her that's a bit of tongue twister.
also got to agree. she stumbled a fair bit. if you find this style of video works then great, what do you need us to review it for it's amateurish which you say gets the work.
the video showed no before or after. just some guy wiping something on a bronze aluminum window frame.
imo if you're going to make a video, this is the type you should make
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KdanPL9bamgamateur, but helpful. shows you know what you're doing and want to help out. the video you posted was an advert only, dull, and absolutely no benefit to anyone who watched it.
the benefit to an amateur video is you feel you get someone who knows what they're talking about and is directly involved in the business operations. I'm doubtful she is the one cleaning windows, perhaps a receptionist?
If so, i'd add that, something like
"hi i'm Zoe and I'm the receptionist here at purple rhino. bronze aluminium window frame restoration, bronze aluminium window frame, bronze aluminium window frame. Give me a call on Oranges oranges eight oranges and I will be happy get our team or restore your windows" etc.
That would at least help the viewer understand why a girl is speaking about a role she appears to not understand and one that is carried out by a guy.