[Darranvps]

Well you all complained over the Meerkat so now he's the star and my PA is doing the voiceover 

What do you think?

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=r14ReUxTdHI

Thanks for all your loverly comments chaps and chapesses

[Smurf]

link don't work rhinoman

[Darranvps]

It does 

[Rich Wilts]

[Darranvps]

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=r14ReUxTdHI

Hope this works 

[Rich Wilts]

I was expecting her to say 'Is that it?' halfway through. She was bored after the second sentence..


She wasn't really clued up was she. With it.


I bet that was you Mr Rhino really wasn't it.

[Smudger]

I think she gave it a decent go considering the subject matter, script,etc..

How much time did you give her to practice ?

I know why you keep pumping these things out, but surely, something more professionally produced would benefit your company and image ??

Darran

[Darranvps]

Darran - we have hundreds of pro made videos but the crappy home made ones bring in the work

We have been testing for years - Trust Me.

Have you got any we could see or don't you bother with them.

[Smudger]

I've done a couple over the years, I think they are still on the website, but I don't really think they any value at the level I can achieve I would not be happy with the results.

I have plans to video a gutter clear in the next week or so, I'll post it for you, but when all said and done it's not an exciting subject even though we can get some stunningly good results

Darran

[8weekly]

Darran - we have hundreds of pro made videos but the crappy home made ones bring in the work

You must be overloaded with work then. 

[Stoots]

thats was poop, mumbling, stumbling, babbleing

but she sounds fit

[premier window cleaners]

I vote for bringing back the Merkat- simple! 

[Darranvps]

Darran - we have hundreds of pro made videos but the crappy home made ones bring in the work

You must be overloaded with work then. 

We are 

[Darranvps]

I vote for bringing back the Merkat- simple! 

He is promoted to ISO 9001 quality Manager - he wont be on the tools so much any more.............

[Darranvps]

thats was poop, mumbling, stumbling, babbleing

but she sounds fit

She is an apprentice PA - only 18 years old - first job - she will get better!

[premier window cleaners]

I vote for bringing back the Merkat- simple! 

He is promoted to ISO 9001 quality Manager - he wont be on the tools so much any more.............

Sounds like someone else i know! 

[Adam P]

O is for ORANGE! not for the number ZERO!

oh oh eight oh.

i lost count how many times she said "bronze aluminium window frame". well done to her that's a bit of tongue twister.

also got to agree. she stumbled a fair bit. if you find this style of video works then great, what do you need us to review it for it's amateurish which you say gets the work. 

the video showed no before or after. just some guy wiping something on a bronze aluminum window frame.


imo if you're going to make a video, this is the type you should make

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KdanPL9bamg

amateur, but helpful.  shows you know what you're doing and want to help out. the video you posted was an advert only, dull, and absolutely no benefit to anyone who watched it. 

the benefit to an amateur video is you feel you get someone who knows what they're talking about and is directly involved in the business operations. I'm doubtful she is the one cleaning windows, perhaps a receptionist?

If so, i'd add that, something like

"hi i'm Zoe and I'm the receptionist here at purple rhino. bronze aluminium window frame restoration, bronze aluminium window frame, bronze aluminium window frame. Give me a call on Oranges oranges eight oranges and I will be happy get our team or restore your windows" etc.

That would at least help the viewer understand why a girl is speaking about a role she appears to not understand and one that is carried out by a guy.

[Tom-01]

Darran - we have hundreds of pro made videos but the crappy home made ones bring in the work

You must be overloaded with work then. 

Hahaha I like that

[Smurf]

Bless her- good attempt though for a youngster as you do like to write tongue twisters scripts

[G Griffin]

thats was poop, mumbling, stumbling, babbleing

but she sounds fit

She is an apprentice PA - only 18 years old - first job - she will get better!

So you took on an 18 year old bird with no experience to be your PA?
I wonder why.
Any pics?