[Peter Fogwill]

Water fed pole explainer video. Feedback please.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jij-csFo_4o

[Bungle]

Why did you bother 

[Peter Fogwill]

Why did you bother 

I wanted to.  Seemingly they help conversion rates when you have one on your website, holds people's attension more than text.  Also helps with search engine ranking.

[Dave Willis]

Might hold the attention of a six year old I suppose. Terrible Peter.

Sorry

[dazmond]

you ve spelt "system" wrong as well as "dissolved" twice and even the word "business".

simply awful peter sorry.the music and everything.very irritating.also ladders are  needed even with a wfp system at times.

[samson]

If you are feeling positive and in a good mood, why not post on here and get totally humiliated and shot down 

[dazmond]

constructive criticism my friend.

[samson]

constructive criticism my friend.

Hate to see you give praise 

[Peter Fogwill]

If you are feeling positive and in a good mood, why not post on here and get totally humiliated and shot down 

Thanks guys.  Its a locked video on you tube that only people with a link could see, it's not open to the public.  Just looking for feedback that is all.

[Smurf]

Good effort Peter if you had a go doing it yourself but was awful all the same.

[Smurf]

Maybe it might be worth speaking to Nat as this is the sort of thing he can do.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zWMaILhE4bM

[Darranvps]

You need to do it like this
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Pg2n4OZ_5jM

Or it wont rank

this is even better

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qrULIHmpo_Y

[Smudger]

Sorry Peter won't play - just comes up private video 

Wish that was the case for the others on this thread 

Darran

[Smurf]

Rhinoman, How's the restoration work going bud?

[Peter Fogwill]

What's the content got to do with the ranking Rihnoman?

Smudger I made it private again, looks like I need to fix a few things

[Smurf]

Peter I'm sure if you go to fiver.com someone will build you a decent promo for you.

[Peter Fogwill]

Peter I'm sure if you go to fiver.com someone will build you a decent promo for you.

Was just messing around Smurf, I only downloaded the software 2 days ago and had a little mess around with it.

[Smurf]

Peter I'm sure if you go to fiver.com someone will build you a decent promo for you.

Was just messing around Smurf, I only downloaded the software 2 days ago and had a little mess around with it.

Nice one Peter as always good to have a play 

[Darranvps]

Sorry Peter won't play - just comes up private video 

Wish that was the case for the others on this thread 

Darran

You are only Jealous 

[Darranvps]

Rhinoman, How's the restoration work going bud?

BUSY!