How about i put embarrassing dirty windows in place of the top row dirty windows and embarrassing dirty windows bottom row replace with unreliability?also is there any thing else to point out in the text ?Thanks
Uniformed staff - not 'fully'
Right hand column I would change to normal type case and not uppercase. The orange and white text in the middle about COMMERCIAL AND DOMESTIC ........... FOR PREMIER WINDOW CLEANING IN LEEDS ........... I would swap them around so the Orange text is below the White text.
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