[sunshine windows]

All comments appreciated

[duncan h]

Is this for the domestic customer? if so. Too many pictures and not enough about it. Remember most people havnt a clue about WFP. Sell it

[sunshine windows]

I should add that this only the front. There will be a more in depth description of the services we offer on the back of the leaflet.

Completely get what your saying though Duncan, thank you.

[David Kent @ KentKleen]

Hi Sunshine,
IMO, too much on it, but then not enough.
Lose the pictures except the one of your van, maybe change this to someone working out of the back of your van.
USP needed, why are they going to use YOU!!

On the delivery side of things,

Please don't just blanket drop them. Plan your distribution, repeat deliver on a regular basis.
Deliver to an area the day before you are cleaning there.
Always solo deliver.
Sunny days produce excellent results (I am not joking)
Deliver yourself or with someone working close to you and  in your work uniform.

Just a few pointers to get the best from your investment.
All the best,
Dave

[Smudger]

Good points from David, I agree, too much, yet not enough.. I don't think it sells you.

Personally I'd drop most references to solar panels, they are so far and few between I wouldn't waste the space. Likewise don't go in depth on what WFP is, people don't care and will be bored by the time they get to the second line, explain it on your web, or once you arrive to do a quote, you can explain and sell WFP better face to face.

Dynamic/action or before & after pictures with punchy statements on windows cleaning
Ie.. WFP reaching windows other find hard to clean...
Take your soffit fascia gutters from green to clean..  Etc....

Darran

[Mick Kent]

I like it. If you do a good blanket drop in your area im sure all the canvassers will love you for it when they sign up all the customers you have warmed up for them :-)..

Sorry just a joke. Honestly it looks good with a nice happy feel to it. Good luck.

[sunshine windows]

Thanks for the positive feedback guys.

Definitely dropping the solar pic. You're right, I've only ever cleaned around 5 jobs. Think I'll put a before and after split of gutter cleaning in there.

Do you think the text is too small, listing our services?

[Smudger]

Yes, be a bit more prominent

Gutter pic would be good

Darran