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Paul erithwc

New logo design feedback good and bad please
« on: November 24, 2014, 09:30:05 pm »
Just getting my logo re designed but im not to sure if it looks ok or not im not a 100%

So good and bad feedback please  ;D

the one on the right is the last revison and the one on the left is the first draft.

Thanks Paul


PoleKing

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Re: New logo design feedback good and bad please
« Reply #1 on: November 24, 2014, 09:31:02 pm »
The biggest picture looks more like a paintbrush to me...
www.LanesWindowCleaning.com

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wfp master

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Re: New logo design feedback good and bad please
« Reply #2 on: November 24, 2014, 10:21:18 pm »
bin it.

jonboywalton75

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Re: New logo design feedback good and bad please
« Reply #3 on: November 24, 2014, 11:07:38 pm »
I like the last revision

Leeds

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Re: New logo design feedback good and bad please
« Reply #4 on: November 25, 2014, 10:25:15 am »
nah looks good! i'd use it!, the blue is a bit too flourescent in my opinion

slap bash

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Re: New logo design feedback good and bad please
« Reply #5 on: November 25, 2014, 11:52:41 am »
The white background is good for me.LIKE

Ian Lancaster

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Re: New logo design feedback good and bad please
« Reply #6 on: November 25, 2014, 12:50:26 pm »
I've always thought that a logo should be instantly recognisable for what it is supposed to be.  Seen on vans travelling at 30mph the viewer only gets a split second to register what's written on it.

Would anyone watching you drive by instantly realise you are a window cleaner?

If so, the logo's a good one.

Leeds

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Re: New logo design feedback good and bad please
« Reply #7 on: November 25, 2014, 02:21:34 pm »
I've always thought that a logo should be instantly recognisable for what it is supposed to be.  Seen on vans travelling at 30mph the viewer only gets a split second to register what's written on it.

Would anyone watching you drive by instantly realise you are a window cleaner?

If so, the logo's a good one.

Would they catch your mobile number in that split second?

No. Most business will come from when you are stationary. It does help if they logo is quickly recognisable though

Paul erithwc

Re: New logo design feedback good and bad please
« Reply #8 on: November 25, 2014, 04:07:20 pm »
Just got the final revison back im still not 100% sure though  :'( :'(

Paul



supernova77

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Re: New logo design feedback good and bad please
« Reply #9 on: November 25, 2014, 04:33:06 pm »
Paul,

i prefer your current logo.

Andy

Bungle

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Re: New logo design feedback good and bad please
« Reply #10 on: November 25, 2014, 05:02:58 pm »
I like the big Erith in black. Not sure what the other signs are doing below it though  ???
We look at them, they look through them.

p1w1

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Re: New logo design feedback good and bad please
« Reply #11 on: November 25, 2014, 05:20:58 pm »
i prefer your current one too..Not sure why you see the need for a graphic of a pole. Big & bold i say and just say what you do, i like the font tho. When it comes to embroidery on shirts, tops etc its not going to look as good as it does on paper.

Dave Willis

Re: New logo design feedback good and bad please
« Reply #12 on: November 25, 2014, 05:27:28 pm »
How can you make your own logo out of curiosity?

Smudger

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Re: New logo design feedback good and bad please
« Reply #13 on: November 25, 2014, 05:34:11 pm »
Likewise, your current one is very good and pleasing to the eye, new one too gimmicky for my taste and why stars off the brush, surely water droplets if anything

Darran
Never argue with an idiot, they will only bring you down to their level, and beat you with experience

Paul erithwc

Re: New logo design feedback good and bad please
« Reply #14 on: November 25, 2014, 05:49:00 pm »
Just wanted to see if i could improve on my current logo and it cost me £88 to find the answer  :-X

Think i might just tweak my current logo instead  ;D ;D

Paul

supernova77

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Re: New logo design feedback good and bad please
« Reply #15 on: November 25, 2014, 05:54:46 pm »
Quote
Just wanted to see if i could improve on my current logo and it cost me £109 to find the answer  Lips Sealed

Think i might just tweak my current logo instead  Grin Grin

Paul

Who did you get to do the new logo?

I think it would look better if the WFP image wasn't over the logo text, maybe feature it to the side or something..? Make it a bit more subtle?

Andy

jonboywalton75

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Re: New logo design feedback good and bad please
« Reply #16 on: November 25, 2014, 06:52:01 pm »
Nice website Paul
I have a free website that is not optimised in any way,  would I get a lot more enquiries if I paid out for  a decent one?

Paul erithwc

Re: New logo design feedback good and bad please
« Reply #17 on: November 25, 2014, 07:34:32 pm »
Nice website Paul
I have a free website that is not optimised in any way,  would I get a lot more enquiries if I paid out for  a decent one?

Every time i pay someone else to do design work website or graphic design it never seems to be right so i end up doing it myself   >:(

My website was done by me using wordpress and a ready made theme from themeforest

Thanks Paul