[kevinquinn]

Just designed this leaflet. What do you think? The last one I did had an offer on for £99.00 for gutters fascia and soffits etc and I think they saw the £99 and it put people off, that said i did get a dozen want that service out of 7000 leaflets. This is printed on 300 gramm A6 card,

[Smudger]

Very in yer face Kevin

Good for you mate for sharing
I like it

Darran

[roundbuilder]

Nice, simple and to the point.
I like it.

[South Window Cleaning Ltd]

Needs a Landline number shows Customers you are local,
But very nice leaflet.

[kevinquinn]

Needs a Landline number shows Customers you are local,
But very nice leaflet.

I thought about that but I work in Bedfordshire, Buckinghamshire and Northamptonshire they all have different area codes.

[formb]

I wouldn't use anyone with a flyer that only listed a mobile number. Having said that you do have your full contact details listed on your website, so that's good.

Overall I like your flyer.

[m.b.s.]

Y can I not c any pictures of anyones posts not on pc or mobile ?

[South Window Cleaning Ltd]

Needs a Landline number shows Customers you are local,
But very nice leaflet.

I thought about that but I work in Bedfordshire, Buckinghamshire and Northamptonshire they all have different area codes.

Hi, Most mobile networks offer a virtual landline that goes to your mobile, you can have an unlimited amount of virtual numbers I would get me for each area you cover, will increase customer takeup.

[m.b.s.]

Or get an 0800 number like I have customer gets something fornothing

[South Window Cleaning Ltd]

Or get an 0800 number like I have customer gets something fornothing

Thats a good idea ?

[m.b.s.]

11.99 a month 300 minuets included direct to my mobile then 9p a min after free mins are up

[Paul Coleman]

You could add at the bottom "Give me a try.  I'm reliable but I won't tell you where you can find me."

Personally, I'm not in favour of advertising that appears to take a swipe at other companies - whether that be overt like yours or more covert.
Also, IMO it's not a good idea anyway to mention negatives - even if it is about the opposition.  The wording that stands out is "unreliable window cleaners" and "fed up."  Both are very negative.  Good advertising works on the readers' subconscious.
After the negative lines that stand out is the bit that looks like a toothpaste ad .

I want to be clear about this.  I'm not having a go.  My criticism is constructive because to it I'm adding:  Highlight the positives of your own business without mentioning the possible negatives of other people's.  Landline number/0800/ or even an 0845 (marked lo-call rate) would be a plus and your home or business address would be a massive plus.

[Paul Clapham]

Change the headline to "Are you looking for a reliable window cleaner"

add your home address as "Office Address ................."

[kevinquinn]

You could add at the bottom "Give me a try.  I'm reliable but I won't tell you where you can find me."

Personally, I'm not in favour of advertising that appears to take a swipe at other companies - whether that be overt like yours or more covert.
Also, IMO it's not a good idea anyway to mention negatives - even if it is about the opposition.  The wording that stands out is "unreliable window cleaners" and "fed up."  Both are very negative.  Good advertising works on the readers' subconscious.
After the negative lines that stand out is the bit that looks like a toothpaste ad .

I want to be clear about this.  I'm not having a go.  My criticism is constructive because to it I'm adding:  Highlight the positives of your own business without mentioning the possible negatives of other people's.  Landline number/0800/ or even an 0845 (marked lo-call rate) would be a plus and your home or business address would be a massive plus.

Very good points, the reason I put about unreliable window cleaner was because 3 weeks ago i canvassed an estate and got 30 customers in two days, they all said we used to have *********** and he hasnt been back in months. He has moved onto another trade. Ive got my address on website as it can easily be changed, I may move shortly so didntbother to put an address on here. Thanks for input though , im interested in 0845, never thought of that.

[kevinquinn]

After the negative lines that stand out is the bit that looks like a toothpaste ad .

Ok, great, I can add flossing to it ))

[Perfect Windows]

"specialise", not "specialize"

Landline numbers from TTNC are £25 and they redirect to a landline for 2p per minute after that.  Landline number is a must IMHO.

V

[Paul Coleman]

After the negative lines that stand out is the bit that looks like a toothpaste ad .

Ok, great, I can add flossing to it ))

Thanks for taking it in the right spirit Kevin.  I wondered after posting if I'd been a little harsh.  I'm not that sort of person though 

[kevinquinn]

After the negative lines that stand out is the bit that looks like a toothpaste ad .

Ok, great, I can add flossing to it ))

Thanks for taking it in the right spirit Kevin.  I wondered after posting if I'd been a little harsh.  I'm not that sort of person though 

They just come and look good. I think as tere on 350 gram card they will push through all letter boxes . Im sick of getting bitte by dogs

[poleman]

very good but wouldnt put a price on

[wpclean]

Maybe add " Please ring for a free quote ".