[richywilts]

found an old power point presentation i was meant to use for a ten minute talk before i got booted out for attendance so thought id put it on video to go with my collection haha

what dya think??

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=V58UeB_RVOw&feature=youtu.be

[Dora Jarr]

Drop the  background music and the graphics and it's pretty good.

[ronnie paton]

Hi Richy did you achieve your goals?

3 new hot system?
supplies shop and ecommerce?
turnover £250k?
canvessing division?
cheshire council contract?

good power point i wouldnt know were to start but i better learn

[richywilts]

no mate that was done before the second break in which buggered me up, got three vans and now back up to 900 customers so hopefully by the summer be up to 1500ish il look to put in some hot systems but not lost much work this year anyway a day or two to snow, id be happy turning over 175-200k by april 2014 ive basically had a year wiped out of building so im a year behind.hopefully if i can get window cleaning all running smoothly this year i can start trying to focus on the shop/e commerce site next year.

i was hoping to have a lot more commerial by now but there not a great deal out there round our way not like manchester with lots of tall building and office blocks and apartment blocks still waiting on a nice little opening with a housing agency

the council contract was put on hold as council was taken over and is now ran by plus dane i think, i will have too look into it see if its going out for tender again

ive been put off canvassing idea by all the posts on here that many firms pop up offering all this and that n then fade away which i think is part n parcel of door step selling dont think the blames is entirely the canvassers the customers signing up too

i had no idea with power point that took me a good while prob over a month of messing round with it

[ronnie paton]

a good honest response

[paul13]

Well done richy even the music was pretty good

[keyser soze]

good stuff richy

[Dora Jarr]

Well done richy even the music was pretty good

Even if utterly incompatible with the message of the images.

[richywilts]

what music would you have chosen to go with it i dont know how to download music just had to use whats been put on the laptop at work!!!

[Dora Jarr]

Ok, something without lyrics.  That U2 track is too much of a dramatic story to get across your services, I think.  But it is only what I think.

WHy not try some kind of elevator music of some kind.

I was left thinking about U2.

Also, seemed to be a lot of pages in the presentation.  Maybe cut them by half?

[SB Cleaning]

Well I thought it was good Richy 

[Dora Jarr]

Not saying it was good or bad, just what I would do differently.

(secretly of course I think it's bad, but not that bad, but I wouldn't use it as it is).

[Neil Gornall]

Love the Stretchhhhhh van at 0.47.
You in the Limo business too? 

[richywilts]

Ok, something without lyrics.  That U2 track is too much of a dramatic story to get across your services, I think.  But it is only what I think.

WHy not try some kind of elevator music of some kind.

I was left thinking about U2.

Also, seemed to be a lot of pages in the presentation.  Maybe cut them by half?

id use different music if i knew how to find to find a decent piece haha

[Dora Jarr]

How about some Kraftwerk or something.

Maybe some cathedral organ music?  Nothing too gloomy though.

(last bit was joke, really).

[richywilts]

im not a very musical person wudnt know where to start ha

[Dora Jarr]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xIjobdArtiA

[CleanClear]

id use different music if i knew how to find to find a decent piece haha

You're in luck Richy, i'm a keen producer and i've custom made a score for you. I'll upload it in a bit. You'll love it.