When I first saw it I thought it was for David's site and thought it was too strong and gave the wrong impression.
If it goes viral in the social media world then that is a different thing and who knows where it leads?
Thanks for the feedback guys, interesting.
I put this video on my personal (not business) facebook page hoping to engage my mates & contacts, so their friends would see their comments on the video, and hopefully want their carpet cleaning sometime. I also pushed it out over my (business) twitter channel...
I've already though about the 'soap opera' idea and quite like it... at £3.89 a video it's worth a try, even if it fails.