[jeff evans]

Hi all,
Iv,e got the bones of my web site up and running, any comments would be helpful.

My appologies up front for the bits i have plagurised, just seemed easer that way.

www.clear-blue-skies.com

CHEERS JEFF.

[Sarah Sarill]

Hi Jeff,

Looks very nice,  not too busy with excessive info on the home page.

My only pointer is that I had trouble reading the font size without moving towards the screen.

Other than that its a good foundation for the site which I assume will contain things like testimonials, more 'at work' photos etc.

Hope that helps,

Sarah

Can I remind you guys theres only 3 shopping days until Valentines Day 

[jeff evans]

Thanks sarah,

 yes i agree about the font size i need to see the person who set up the pages for me, i cant get into that part of the site without him.
But will sort that out later,

JEFF.

[*Chris Browne]

hi jeff
yes i agree about the font but apart from that it looks very proffesional indeed,how much does barry charge for a site like that?


chris

[jeff evans]

HI CHRIS.

THANKS FOR YOUR COMMENTS,
 IF YOU CONTACT BARRY AND TELL HIM THAT YOU GOT HIS NAME OF THE CLEANITUP SITE I THINK YOU WILL FIND HIM VERY REASONABLE ON PRICE.

CHEERS JEFF.

[ian m]

hi Jeff


I Agree with the points regarding the font size, might be possible to get round this by using bold type.

Also, there are a couple of grammatical and spelling errors eg; cordoned   always, "the number one priority" could be shortened to" the priority"  check priority in a dictionary and you'll see what I mean.

That being said,  it's a very well laid out site, easy to navigate, and I hope it gets you plenty of business


regards

Ian

[jeff evans]

Hi IAN.
Thanks for taking the time to look through it all
these are just the type comments i was looking for,i will take
on board what you have said.

Thanks again Jeff.

[Mick (UHPS)]

Hi Jeff

Positive criticism   Brill site, agree with the font/background issue points raised above also and I am being 'mega picky' here  

cordoned of off

I think there needs to be a space after the comma after house and no comma after frames.

I.E. size of house,age of window frames,and access to windows on the property

I don't think you need the comma after schedule

We have an excellent reputation for being trustworthy, keeping to schedule, and doing a first class job.

I don't think you need the comma after outlets and schedule.

Our clients include large Commercial buildings, Public houses, Retail outlets, and many prestige domestic properties in the Cheshire area. We have an excellent reputation for being trustworthy, keeping to schedule, and doing a first class job. 

I would be happy with safety being "the number one priority". I think you can have several priorities and in this case safety is your number one.

Can I remind you guys theres only 3 shopping days until Valentines Day 

Thanks. You have probably saved my life 

[jeff evans]

Thankyou ian for your comments, i appreciate your input I  will take them on board.

WELL I DID ASK 

Cheers Jeff.

[ian m]

Hi Jeff

Hope it all goes well


may the force be with you


Ian

[Marc's on the Glass, LLC]

I think it's great! 

Font size was a good suggestion. 

They pink color was not much of a contrast and made it difficult to read.

These are getting better all the time.  Way to go guys!

[Ben Walker]

Hi Jeff

Positive criticism   Brill site, agree with the font/background issue points raised above also and I am being 'mega picky' here  

cordoned of off

I think there needs to be a space after the comma after house and no comma after frames.

I.E. size of house,age of window frames,and access to windows on the property

I don't think you need the comma after schedule

We have an excellent reputation for being trustworthy, keeping to schedule, and doing a first class job.

I don't think you need the comma after outlets and schedule.

Our clients include large Commercial buildings, Public houses, Retail outlets, and many prestige domestic properties in the Cheshire area. We have an excellent reputation for being trustworthy, keeping to schedule, and doing a first class job. 

I would be happy with safety being "the number one priority". I think you can have several priorities and in this case safety is your number one.

Can I remind you guys theres only 3 shopping days until Valentines Day 

Thanks. You have probably saved my life 

also avoid the words 'detritus' and 'erected'
try 'dirt' and 'built'

[Ben Walker]

 

[Mick (UHPS)]

I think it's great! 

Font size was a good suggestion. 

They pink color was not much of a contrast and made it difficult to read.

These are getting better all the time. Way to go guys![/b]

I agree...I am in the process of building a web site (probably why I was a bit picky :) and would be really proud of a site like this.
Well done Jeff   

[WavieDavie]

On my PC there appears to be a large white border - any chance of making the site full-screen?

If it was full-screen, I'd also be able to scroll down using the mouse from anywhere on the page, not having to use the bar on the right hand side.

Helpfully yours,

Mr Grumpy

[jeff evans]

Hi mr grumpy.

i cant change the size of the site from home, i to was
not impressed with the size at first, but after thinking
about it this makes my site different from all the others,
and i now think that can only be a good thing.

Thanks for your comments

Cheers JEFF.

[KJG]

Hi mr grumpy.

i cant change the size of the site from home, i to was
not impressed with the size at first, but after thinking
about it this makes my site different from all the others,
and i now think that can only be a good thing.

Thanks for your comments

Cheers JEFF.

Nice site Jeff. The size is the old standard 800x600. If anyone still uses this screen resolution, it will fill their screen. I think your man was just playing it safe. The only problem, barring the ones mentioned, is on your intro page when using Mozilla based browsers and Opera.

<%@LANGUAGE="VBSCRIPT" CODEPAGE="1252"%>

appears in the top left hand corner.

[gaza]

have a look at my site :1st-abc.co.uk you can use annything on there,if its any use to you

 gaza

[jeff evans]

Hi GAZ.
LOOKED AT YOUR SITE EXPECTING TO FIND A KIDDIES FIRST ABC BOOK SITE JUDGING BY SOME OF YOUR REPLIES ON HERE.

BUT WAS PLEASENTLY SUPPRISED TO FIND A GOOD INFORMATIVE SITE.

HOW MANY VANS DO YOU HAVE GAZ.?

CHEERS FOR THE OFFER JEFF.

[jeff evans]

SORRY GAZA .
GOT THE WRONG GAZ DOH !!!!!!!!!!!
THOUGHT I WAS REPLYING TO H2O GAZ

SORRY JEFF.