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Neil Grainger

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Does anyone have any good letters for pubs
« on: January 06, 2006, 03:49:40 pm »
Hi

Am looking to send details to pubs, does anyone have any documents that they wouldn't mind sharing with me.

I have some but dont seem to do any good with pubs.

Please Help

Regards

Neil

nick p

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Re: Does anyone have any good letters for pubs
« Reply #1 on: January 06, 2006, 04:30:19 pm »
hi neil

just emailed you they got emailed to me the other night when i asked same question

cheers nick p

BRSL

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Re: Does anyone have any good letters for pubs
« Reply #2 on: January 06, 2006, 04:35:58 pm »
W - www.brsl.co.nz
E - james@brsl.co.nz

Kind regards James C

Neil Grainger

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Re: Does anyone have any good letters for pubs
« Reply #3 on: January 06, 2006, 04:58:11 pm »
Hi gents thanks for tha, These are the ones I have not had much success from.

Did you?

cheers

Neil

(Ihate Jan its so bloody quiet) Had to turn away work in december beacuse i did not have any space and then Jan comes and it one job a day if I am lucky

nick p

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Re: Does anyone have any good letters for pubs
« Reply #4 on: January 06, 2006, 05:12:24 pm »
hi neil

i havent tried them yet if you do get any different ones let us have a look thanks

yeah jan is a bit quiet had 2 small jobs today 1 tomorrow but not much else out there leafleting every day at the moment

cheers nick p

gort

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Re: Does anyone have any good letters for pubs
« Reply #5 on: January 06, 2006, 11:38:02 pm »
This any good to you

Dear Sir


BRIGHT AND NEW LOOKING CARPETS FOR SPRING

Whenever a customer walks into your pub the carpets can either help increase your sales or help turn people off.

Many licensees have found that having there carpets cleaned does two things:-

First   Passing trade tends to increase.  A clean pub not only feels more comfortable for regular customers. It also attracts more new clientele.


Second   The useful Life of the carpet is extended. Deep cleaning means that the carpets last longer. And in better condition.

    Being specialist carpet and upholstery cleaners, we are skilled in cleaning and restoring both neglected and nearly new carpets.

We can make old carpets look like new 
We can even breathe new life into old looking carpets. All at a price which is a lot less than you think.

I will ring you in a day or so to see if you would like a free no obligation quotation. 

Or alternatively, you may simply ring us now to make arrangements for a free inspection.

We guarantee good results
You could be very pleasantly surprised by the benefits you and your staff experience.

I look forward to seeing you and being of service to you soon.

Yours sincerely ,


Neil Grainger

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Re: Does anyone have any good letters for pubs
« Reply #6 on: January 07, 2006, 07:03:44 am »
gort

Have you had good feedback from this?

Cheers

Neil

Dennis

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Re: Does anyone have any good letters for pubs
« Reply #7 on: January 07, 2006, 10:16:46 am »
Dear Landlord

I am starting a new business shortly.
I will clean your carpets in exchange for whisky.

Yours faithfully,

C. Kennedy
London

Len Gribble

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Re: Does anyone have any good letters for pubs
« Reply #8 on: January 07, 2006, 12:59:25 pm »
Neil

Been down the road of sending letters to pubs, a hard nut to crack!

You will find some are independent but most are owned by a group and there local management don’t have a say in anything and bin the letter! Also they change hands very quickly; Financial Mail on Sunday is a good starting point!

What I suggest!  Is that you visit your targeted pray to find out the lay of the land so to speak!

I see a few of my blue chip clients are having a hard time! What’s the betting cleaning get the chop!! :(

Len
Always bear in mind that your own resolution to succeed is more important than any other. (Sidcup Kent)

John_Flynn

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Re: Does anyone have any good letters for pubs
« Reply #9 on: January 07, 2006, 01:47:12 pm »
Dear Landlord

I am starting a new business shortly.
I will clean your carpets in exchange for whisky.

Yours faithfully,

C. Kennedy
London

Also add,

The first clean can be Blended, thereafter if you have me back, it will have to be Single Malt!!.
I get better looking each day!!

gort

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Re: Does anyone have any good letters for pubs
« Reply #10 on: January 07, 2006, 02:22:15 pm »
Letters are ok but there is no substitute  for putting a suit on and going in the pub and selling your service personnally. Remember sell yourself first your product second

BRSL

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Re: Does anyone have any good letters for pubs
« Reply #11 on: January 07, 2006, 04:27:31 pm »
Thanks Gort

Ive had no success with letters, I think a change in stratagy is required, I believe the best way si to find out the details of the manager send one directly to him and find out who the brewery is and mail them too again too who ever it concerns at the brewers, short of that cold calling seems to be the best way, drop in and quote them then and there.

James
W - www.brsl.co.nz
E - james@brsl.co.nz

Kind regards James C

the red carpet

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Re: Does anyone have any good letters for pubs
« Reply #12 on: January 07, 2006, 06:03:38 pm »
how about just sending a quote, with a letter

you could do this with pubs, resturaunts, shops etc.

somthing along the lines of.

to whom it may concern,

hi there my name is xxxx and i am the proprietor of xxxx

firstly please dont take offence at this letter as that is not the nature in wich it was written.
however on a recent trip to your establishment purely  of a personal nature, i couldnt help but notice, that in my humble opinion your carpets didnt seem to be reflecting your upmarket image in the best possible way.
please dont think im insulting the way your establishment looks its just i belive i could help you create a better image to your customers wich may result in more passing trade for you.
i have taken the liberty of preparing a quote for you just so you can see how little it would cost to get them back in tip top condition.

i have prepared this quote assuming the work will have to take place outside of office hours.
if this is not the case please let me know and im sure it can be done even cheaper.

it would need a bit of work but it could work.
what do you think?