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jon adams

  • Posts: 124
Re: How do i get commercial work ?
« Reply #60 on: December 23, 2005, 05:41:59 pm »
hi sarah,
              Hope im better late than never, would you be kind enough to send me a copy of your two letters, would be very much appreciated. Have a great xmas :)
John
       john.adams83@tesco.net
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gary evans

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Re: How do i get commercial work ?
« Reply #61 on: December 24, 2005, 09:12:27 am »
sarah

Can i also have a copy of both looking for new work in 2006

e-mail Landywood@tiscali.co.uk

thanks in advance for the help

Gary
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Chris Cottrell

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Re: How do i get commercial work ?
« Reply #62 on: December 24, 2005, 10:24:18 am »
Can I jump on the band wagon too please Sarah

Pretty Please :-* :-*

Chris

8)Merry Xmas Everyone 8)
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neil100

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Re: How do i get commercial work ?
« Reply #63 on: December 25, 2005, 09:20:42 pm »
Oh Sarah,

Please ,please, can you send me copys too. I,m targeting commercial work next year. You could be a god send. Send too:-

neillawlor@tiscali.co.uk

Many thanks and HAPPY XMAS.

Nel.
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julianbiggs

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Re: How do i get commercial work ?
« Reply #64 on: December 27, 2005, 02:43:06 pm »
Any chance of a copy to:

biggsjul@aol.com

thanks
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window wonder

  • Posts: 73
Re: How do i get commercial work ?
« Reply #65 on: December 28, 2005, 10:19:02 am »
hi there. could you please send me a copy i had a go earlier this year at comercial canvassing. but no results as yet. think my letters were not the best. it  would be great if you could send me a copy. reidmartyn@tiscali.co.uk
thanks :)
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stephen d

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Re: How do i get commercial work ?
« Reply #66 on: December 28, 2005, 04:50:28 pm »
sarah, i would be grateful of a copy of them all aswell steve@dunbar98.freeserve.co.uk cheers steve
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s.hughes

Re: How do i get commercial work ?
« Reply #67 on: December 28, 2005, 05:08:29 pm »
Quote from: Sarah Sarill on September 06, 2005, 10:03:34 pm
Rich, If you view my previous post titled 'Poaching commercial' you will see that I have just written a marketing letter just for the very same task.

My initial plan was to target a different business sector WEEKLY but have just received my first reply and now appreciate what follow-up work there is involved so am sending out batches and waiting a few weeks before I do another one.

Let me know if you want a copy as I am more than happy to send you one.

Finally I am just putting together a new quotation pack for the first reply which will form the next stage of the chain.

So far I have written a letter draft to each of my existing commercial customers asking them to supply me a written testimonial for this quotation pack. Again if you would like a copy just ask.

The next step is to revise my quotation letter content itself so have asked this forum for help (see my latest post for the details).

Its not instant but am taking my time to do it professionally cos thats what I feel will render a positive result.

Hope this helps
 Sarill

Hi Sarah
Could you please let me have a copy of your letter. steven.hughes267@ntlworld.com

Thanks
Steve
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dougsparkle

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Re: How do i get commercial work ?
« Reply #68 on: December 28, 2005, 06:22:19 pm »
Hiya
Getting commercial work is not necessarily the answer to earning more money. Its worth while bearing in mind that if you lose contracts with commercial customers, WHICH YOU WILL, then losing say £5000 a year on one customer does tend to suck! Your bread and butter is definetly private customers who pay a more modest sum, but at least it doesnt dent your pocket if one if them says "Up Yours". Take my advice. After being in the game 21 years, commercial work isnt all it is cracked up to be
Doug & Tracey
http://www.dtworld.co.uk
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andy east sussex

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Re: How do i get commercial work ?
« Reply #69 on: December 28, 2005, 07:15:07 pm »
could you send me one as well cheers mate
reliablewindowcleaning@hotmail.co.uk
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G & M

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Re: How do i get commercial work ?
« Reply #70 on: December 28, 2005, 09:20:02 pm »
Hi Sarill, could you please email us a copy of both or maybe post them on this site. Cheers Michael -G&M

      hickeys45@yahoo.ie
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S.C.S

Re: How do i get commercial work ?
« Reply #71 on: December 30, 2005, 04:49:15 pm »
Hi sarah or any1 else who has had the information sent to them could you forward it to me as well please would be very happy

kind regards

andy

sparklesalesuk@blueyonder.co.uk
 :)
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Sarah Sarill

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Re: How do i get commercial work ?
« Reply #72 on: December 31, 2005, 03:49:05 pm »
All sent guys, but tomcat you left no addy and there is not one in your profile.  Let me have one to send it to you.

If anyone makes any improvements to it let me know as I am always trying to make my communication better.

Sarah
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colinyates

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Re: How do i get commercial work ?
« Reply #73 on: January 02, 2006, 11:32:11 am »
 just come across this topic and would also appreciate a copy.

Many thanks  Colin
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ScrimShady

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Re: How do i get commercial work ?
« Reply #74 on: January 02, 2006, 09:00:42 pm »
is there any chance of a copy of that please?
richa479@aol.com
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G & M

  • Posts: 513
Re: How do i get commercial work ?
« Reply #75 on: January 03, 2006, 10:43:10 pm »
Sarah I didn't recieve your email could you please send it again.
 Cheers Michael -G&M
 
 hickeys45@yahoo.ie
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Sarah Sarill

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Re: How do i get commercial work ?
« Reply #76 on: January 03, 2006, 10:46:37 pm »
http://www.cleanitup.co.uk/smf/index.php?topic=14799.0

Hi guys,

Here is the link to the Documents to Download section where I have posted it.

Hope it helps,

Sarah
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Sarah

lynngc

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Re: How do i get commercial work ?
« Reply #77 on: January 04, 2006, 12:29:30 am »
please can i have a copy also.  could do with getting commercial work myself, but don't quite know where to start.
any help greatfully recieved.

e-mail; gowercleaningservices@msn.com

from lynn
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lynn @ gower cleaning services, swansea.

JAG

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Re: How do i get commercial work ?
« Reply #78 on: January 04, 2006, 08:59:05 pm »
Hello Sarah,
As you have had a good response to  the " letter" i am also curious to see what a great author you are ,would it  be possible to forward a copy to Citycleaningser@aol.com,
many thanks,
HAPPY NEW YEAR
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genesis_windows

Re: How do i get commercial work ?
« Reply #79 on: January 05, 2006, 03:49:55 pm »
if you wouldnt mind sarah, me also?
genesis_window_specialist@yahoo.co.uk
many thanks
Russell
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