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supernova77

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« on: November 29, 2006, 10:04:00 pm »
Hi All,

I've just uploaded a new page to my website to cover fascia & soffit cleaning:

http://www.scs.uk.com/fasciasoffit.html

Do you think the text reads ok? I'm not sure it flows very well... Any suggestions?

Thanks,
Andy

Chris Cottrell

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« Reply #1 on: November 29, 2006, 10:07:20 pm »
looks v.good to me andy

Wozza

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« Reply #2 on: November 29, 2006, 10:10:31 pm »
I think your new addition looks great infact your whole web site looks great.

I am very envious



warren

jeff1

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« Reply #3 on: November 29, 2006, 10:12:42 pm »
Very good Andy it looks good, would it have not been better with a before and after shot of the guttering?

supernova77

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« Reply #4 on: November 29, 2006, 10:15:50 pm »
Thanks for your comments guys.

I'm in the process of collecting some before and after pictures for a new gallery page that I'll be adding soon :)

Andy

jeff1

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« Reply #5 on: November 29, 2006, 10:22:37 pm »
Before and after shots in my mind, are a good selling point, if they see the results, it makes them think about having it done.

But well done on the whole web-site it looks good.

niceandclean

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« Reply #6 on: November 29, 2006, 10:43:26 pm »
What a great website! All laid out well, good text and no waffling, straight to the point. Brill !! :)

S_RICHARDSON

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« Reply #7 on: November 29, 2006, 10:43:56 pm »
It seems like a very cool website on the whole mate even the new page!!!!   ;) ;)

supernova77

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« Reply #8 on: November 29, 2006, 10:50:20 pm »
Thanks for all your kind comments guys  :)

Andy

julianbiggs

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« Reply #9 on: November 29, 2006, 11:09:02 pm »
Looks great but for a professional look check the spelling on mold, can be spelt this way but most people refer to it as "mould" and "noticeable" was spelt wrong too.

Looks really good though.

niceandclean

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« Reply #10 on: November 29, 2006, 11:18:25 pm »
Looks great but for a professional look check the spelling on mold, can be spelt this way but most people refer to it as "mould" and "noticeable" was spelt wrong too.

 

Well i never "Noticed" that!!! Mold is fine!!

WavieDavie

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« Reply #11 on: November 30, 2006, 06:52:08 pm »
I think really does make a difference is more confidence-inspiring than really can make a difference.

To me, it reads that there might be a difference, but you're not too sure.

Just my opinion.
You're a Scottish window-cleaner? Licensed or not, get yourself along to www.slwcn.org right now !

Davie Park
Dalzell Window Cleaning Service - Edinburgh www.windowscleaner.co.uk

seanmcshane

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« Reply #12 on: November 30, 2006, 06:56:53 pm »
Mould is spelt "mould"...!!
Mold is a place in North Wales.

That is a great website, by the way...right to the point.
The "pay your bill online" is a great facility.

10/10... ;D