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S.A.J

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What do you think?
« on: October 17, 2006, 04:43:30 pm »
What do youguys & girls think of my flyer?




Stuart
SAJ Window Cleaners Ltd
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jeff1

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Re: What do you think?
« Reply #1 on: October 17, 2006, 04:45:55 pm »
Go on don't be shy and show us the link then  ;D ;D
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r4g1t

Re: What do you think?
« Reply #2 on: October 17, 2006, 04:48:09 pm »
very nice   where is it ??
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Re: What do you think?
« Reply #3 on: October 17, 2006, 04:50:42 pm »
 ??? ???
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wildstyles

S.A.J

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Re: What do you think?
« Reply #4 on: October 17, 2006, 04:53:40 pm »
its there now :-[
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AuRavelling79

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Re: What do you think?
« Reply #5 on: October 17, 2006, 04:58:23 pm »
Very good SAJ - tells folk what you do and shows pole to it's full advantage!

But you've got the I and the L transposed in "reliable"
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It's a game of three halves!

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Re: What do you think?
« Reply #6 on: October 17, 2006, 04:59:56 pm »
How about stating what you clean  ie  factories,shops,residential etc.Also maybe a mention of health and safety goes down well.Apart from that,they look nice
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wildstyles

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Re: What do you think?
« Reply #7 on: October 17, 2006, 05:02:04 pm »
Oh yes and the spelling error
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wildstyles

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Re: What do you think?
« Reply #8 on: October 17, 2006, 05:03:38 pm »
Sorry i just noticed you have got domestic and commercial. my mistake ;)
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wildstyles

Sarah Sarill

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Re: What do you think?
« Reply #9 on: October 17, 2006, 05:18:55 pm »
Very clean Stuart.

Could you post it in the documents to download section so  others can see it as a template for them to adapt.

Sarah


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Sarah

busydaffodil

Re: What do you think?
« Reply #10 on: October 17, 2006, 05:24:44 pm »
but remove your phone number before you post it in the docs place...you wouldnt want weirdo phonecalls would you?  ;)

Nice flyer though.
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S.A.J

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Re: What do you think?
« Reply #11 on: October 17, 2006, 05:46:34 pm »
Cheers guys & girls for your feed back.

Made a few changes
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Re: What do you think?
« Reply #12 on: October 17, 2006, 05:50:08 pm »
 ;)
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wildstyles

windows_chepstow

Re: What do you think?
« Reply #13 on: October 17, 2006, 05:50:55 pm »
Saj,

You need to 'tell' your potential punters what to do.  I know this may seem obvious, but the 'marketing people' say this is what you should do.

Something like:

'If you want the services of a regular and professional window cleaner, then phone 123456788 anytime'.

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S.A.J

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Re: What do you think?
« Reply #14 on: October 17, 2006, 06:15:30 pm »
Cheers for that Tosh.

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windows_chepstow

Re: What do you think?
« Reply #15 on: October 17, 2006, 06:20:44 pm »
It sounds a bit 'grovelly' with the 'please' and 'thank you' at the end.  I'd take it out, but if you leave it in, put a full stop at the end of the previous sentance before Thank you (two words).

Also, why would a recommendation from a Rugby Club carry any weight?

I assume you're a rugby player, have mates there and like your beer and singing silly songs?
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S.A.J

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Re: What do you think?
« Reply #16 on: October 17, 2006, 06:47:31 pm »
No i'm not a rugby player i hate the sport!

everyone in the area i'm about to canvess knows the rugby club or someone that goes to the rugby club. I thought it might help get new customers if they know i clean a local buisness.
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windows_chepstow

Re: What do you think?
« Reply #17 on: October 17, 2006, 06:49:00 pm »
Fair enough!  The logo looks good.
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macleod

Re: What do you think?
« Reply #18 on: October 17, 2006, 06:57:52 pm »
on the left is for the housewives

on the right is for commercial
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S.A.J

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Re: What do you think?
« Reply #19 on: October 17, 2006, 07:23:08 pm »
Thank You everyone for your input. ;D

Stuart
SAJ Window Cleaners
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