[Klean07]

http://www.kkleanwindowcleaning.co.uk/

[SeanK]

I like it, best of luck.

[tlwcs]

Your banner says 3 million pl and the key point says 2 million.
very good though
Tony

[Marc Stock]

Looks great.

I gotta get my website sorted out.

Its naff

[EandM]

Commercial Cleaning
Travelling less between jobs means we have less overheads and having already been chosen to carry out work for other businesses in your area then other businesses are happy with our prices and you can be rest assured you will have chosen the right company.


Sentence structure is a little clumsy. How about:

 Commercial Cleaning
Less travelling  between jobs means that we have fewer overheads and  as other businesses have already selected us to carry out work  in your area then you can be assured  that you have chosen  the right company.

(or something like that )

Great site !

[EandM]

Residential Cleaning
Residential Window Cleaning or otherwise known as Domestic Window Cleaning is carried out by us using water-fed poles. It is important you find a window cleaner who has been approved or recommended, provides a professional and reliable service and someone

Someone...?

[nathankaye]

Apart from some grammatical errors, as highlighted in the above two threads. It is quite a good web page, beats mine on facebook anyway!

[NWH]

I like it very good.

[AuRavelling79]

Very nice.

Home page "Facia's" should read "Fascias".

"What we do - residential column" appears to have a line missing at the bottom. Maybe these could be more succinct?

Other paragraphs under services need proof reading and reducing in wordiness (IMO).

Just an example - I wouldn't (under Commercial Cleaning) tell the prospect that there are "so many window cleaners out there" - it implies we are two-a-penny!

Do prospective customers really need to be informed that domestic and residential are the same thing?

[Stoots]

Looks decent.

Not the best ive ever seen, but not the worst, decent enough

Its a window cleaning website and seems to cover the basics so thats that

[Smurf]

"Want a competitive quote in Stourbridge or surrounding areas?" Can be taken by some as cheap so will expect the price to be so.

[SB Cleaning]

Looks good...

I would change your sediment filter though...disgusting

[Klean07]

Thanks for your input guys its appreciated!

[johnny bravo]

are you using any water in your video,    have you been taking speed, or an enhanced  suplement to make you work that fast.

[Tosh]

This is why he'll never be picked for the WFP event in the Olympics for England, he's obviously on some sort of illegal supplement.

[dazmond]

i like the look of it but your grammar/spelling is poor(like a lot of window cleaners websites).change a few words here and there and get someone to spell check it properly and itll be a very good website.