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LBWCS

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Re: Website take a look what would you change ?
« Reply #20 on: February 18, 2013, 08:07:45 am »
Really well done

David Hernandez

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Re: Website take a look what would you change ?
« Reply #21 on: February 19, 2013, 11:29:01 am »
Your Website is simply great and cool with its logo and appearance, every thing is ok but you need to change your home page and sub page title tags because it is very large, try to make it small within 70 count and use catchy title.

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JackieW

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Re: Website take a look what would you change ?
« Reply #22 on: February 20, 2013, 05:28:38 pm »
Very good, well done.
Few observations,

We are based in Erith, Kent covering all surrounding areas( full stop followed by capital W) we specialise in resident (ial)& commercial window cleaning using both traditional methods for ground floor windows (comma) and our pure water fed pole system to clean window’s (no apostrophe) above ground floor up to a height of 30 feet from the safety of the ground. Support your local cleaner call today on...

I would change ''loads'' of customers to ''lots''.

We provide a regular & reliable window cleaning service to all our customers, (full stop not comma)You can have your windows cleaned every:(no colon ) 5 weeks, 10 weeks or just as a one-off clean. Prices start from only £5 for front only terraced house

 We use both traditional methods for some ground floor windows & our ladder less water fed pole window cleaning system on windows above ground floor for added safety, (full stop instead of comma) all UPVC window frames and window sills are included in the price.

without the need (to) squeegee or leather off.

If you are not happy with the cleaning results let us know with (in) 48hrs and we will re-clean your windows free plus (plus?)

Also noticed there is no 'detached' house price unless I haven't spotted it.

Joe Shanahan

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Re: Website take a look what would you change ?
« Reply #23 on: February 20, 2013, 05:53:19 pm »
I loved your old Wordpress theme Paul, what was the template name please?

This site looks pretty good too mate.  Perhaps while you are off having your surgery you could build a few people sites!

PAUL ERITH

Re: Website take a look what would you change ?
« Reply #24 on: February 20, 2013, 08:09:53 pm »
Very good, well done.
Few observations,

We are based in Erith, Kent covering all surrounding areas( full stop followed by capital W) we specialise in resident (ial)& commercial window cleaning using both traditional methods for ground floor windows (comma) and our pure water fed pole system to clean window’s (no apostrophe) above ground floor up to a height of 30 feet from the safety of the ground. Support your local cleaner call today on...

I would change ''loads'' of customers to ''lots''.

We provide a regular & reliable window cleaning service to all our customers, (full stop not comma)You can have your windows cleaned every:(no colon ) 5 weeks, 10 weeks or just as a one-off clean. Prices start from only £5 for front only terraced house

 We use both traditional methods for some ground floor windows & our ladder less water fed pole window cleaning system on windows above ground floor for added safety, (full stop instead of comma) all UPVC window frames and window sills are included in the price.

without the need (to) squeegee or leather off.

If you are not happy with the cleaning results let us know with (in) 48hrs and we will re-clean your windows free plus (plus?)

Also noticed there is no 'detached' house price unless I haven't spotted it.


Thanks for the pointer  ;)

Paul