Looks nice, but I would leave out the "call within 24 hours part'', because if someone did intend to call you and thought they would miss out on the special offers if they didn't call within 24 hours , then they might not bother to call at all. Better to have a much longer time, say a week or even two. You could offer a free carpet survey too, a good way to get into a potential customers house and build up trust in you. Of course you will have to learn how to do a survey if tou have never done them but I am sure you will get help here if you ask.
A word of advice, unless you are using Extracta equipment, better ask their permission to use their photographs as you obviously copied them from their catalog or web site.