[Kenny83]

Hi, would like your opinions please on this design here - www.ioptimise4u.co.uk/leekenny

it still needs images uploading and one or two tweaks

 or should i stick with my original one here? - www.powerwashcleaning.co.uk

Opinions / critisism / advice appreciated

Thanks

[Matt Jenkins]

In my personal opinion: I prefer the new one.

Why
- cleaner and generally looks better
- scrolls smoother

Something that applies equally to both - I think there is too much for one page. I'm sure there is a better way to organise everything. But that's my personal view!

Good luck!

[BDCS]

I'd keep them both and link them. I prefer the old one as the new one needs the reams of text breaking up or into pages

[Kenny83]

I'd keep them both and link them. I prefer the old one as the new one needs the reams of text breaking up or into pages

would it still be good for google if I kept them both? the new one has exactly the same text as the old one, everything is copied and pasted, the reams of text are needed on the same page to be honest for it to rank well, around 6 - 800 words with a keyword density (pressure washing) of 3 - 5%, with the new one i get a free mobile / PDA site aswell, which seems to be accounting for about 25% of my hits, how would you say the new one is in terms of usabillity

Thanks

[Kenny83]

In my personal opinion: I prefer the new one.

Why
- cleaner and generally looks better
- scrolls smoother

Something that applies equally to both - I think there is too much for one page. I'm sure there is a better way to organise everything. But that's my personal view!

Good luck!

Too much in what way would you say? too many features? or too much text?

Thanks

[BDCS]

Technically - I've no idea, I just get bored with too many words

[Blast Away]

Lee you make websites more than you do jobs! 

And you buy more engines than the times you use your main one! 

[Matt Gibson]

Lee k, is the new one a wordpress template? Cause you can just add a widget to create a mobole format of your website. You can add the widget to your old site and when people search it it will come up on their phones in a mobile format. search mine o  your phone an see.

[Kenny83]

Lee you make websites more than you do jobs!  

And you buy more engines than the times you use your main one!  

haha, ive no time to clean driveways now coz i'm making too many websites, when it rains i sell machines instead of using them, haha, glad this suns back (no offence to those under the hose pipe ban) because ive got 2 to seal tomorrow... going liverpool today to watch the national/football.
 

[Kenny83]

Lee k, is the new one a wordpress template? Cause you can just add a widget to create a mobole format of your website. You can add the widget to your old site and when people search it it will come up on their phones in a mobile format. search mine o  your phone an see.

yeah matt it's wordpress, will have a look for that, what do you think of the new design? or should i stick witht the old one?

[Matt Gibson]

I like your old ine better mate, but the new one might look as good once the header and all the pics are added.

[Matt Jenkins]

For me too much words on one page and needing to scroll down, and down and down to read everything.

Would suggest better use of pages. Generally people are turned on/off in the first few seconds of looking at page. If off they hit the BACK button!

[clarkson]

 hi lee
 i think i like the new one it seem sharper cleaner as said, but as said leave them both running.

 love the video. but is 'crud' a technical term.

 cheers

 john