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peekeclean

  • Posts: 348
my new web site
« on: August 05, 2011, 09:50:18 pm »
Hi all check out my website? what do you think??
www.peekeclean.co.uk
thanks joe

SB Cleaning

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Re: my new web site
« Reply #1 on: August 05, 2011, 10:18:13 pm »
Looks good to me :)

I did notice you have spelt "competitive" wrong on the first page though im hoping i have spelt it right now!! ;D

Re: my new web site
« Reply #2 on: August 05, 2011, 10:22:53 pm »
Your pictures, being thumbnails are small. I would have less but bigger pictures.

mark311069

Re: my new web site
« Reply #3 on: August 05, 2011, 10:26:26 pm »
and your high powered jet washer is a b+q job. might want to change that picture. iam not having a go you asked for comments so ............

Andy@w.c.s

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Re: my new web site
« Reply #4 on: August 05, 2011, 10:56:37 pm »
Being an old fart i hate things that move on a web site  >:(

your flash writing that move on the right of the page take's some reading or is that just me ? it seems very fast  ???

might be just me  ;D

old fart  :)

Andy@w.c.s

  • Posts: 289
Re: my new web site
« Reply #5 on: August 05, 2011, 10:58:23 pm »
that should have been on the left hand side  :'(sorry


see i told you i was an old fart lol ;D

Blue Frog Systems

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Re: my new web site
« Reply #6 on: August 05, 2011, 11:09:19 pm »
Logo, in meadway and contact details you can see the pixells quite badly

Flash doesnt work for anyone with a mac, ipad, iphone or using safari

Your first page title is set one space down (should be at the top level with facebook)

pictures on services page take too long to load - quite small

contact page seems empty

i'd suggest increasing the size of the text.

Sorry, but my wife is a web designer - so i pick things up from her.

If it makes you feel better she picks up things about window cleaning and can price a job up (she hates being able to do that)
Only those who risk going too far will truly know how far they can actually go

neil kellett

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Re: my new web site
« Reply #7 on: August 05, 2011, 11:12:41 pm »
Cheap and tacky. And as above, what the story with the karcher piece of scrap? I would'nt clean the dog with that. Ok if you did it up yourself though to compliment a good round. But i would'nt launch with it.
Vilyetyet' c paboti mozhna v dva c4yota!
One can lose a job in the blink of an eye!

Nick Wareham

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Re: my new web site
« Reply #8 on: August 05, 2011, 11:18:27 pm »
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The system uses a special distilled water
No it doesn't.  Its deionised which is not the same.  Distilled water for window cleaning sounds just unbelievable to a customer.

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Flash doesnt work for anyone with a mac, ipad, iphone or using safari

Not true.  I'm using a mac, and safari and flash works perfectly.  Iphone and ipad, yes you're right.  But Mac and safari works fine.

Having said that, the flash on this page just looks terrible, sorry.  It makes the site look rubbishy.

groundhog

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Re: my new web site
« Reply #9 on: August 05, 2011, 11:37:59 pm »
I think its a bit too busy, and the moving on the left really put me off as I was unable to concentrate enough to read all the text. Other than that it was ok!!  :)

andyjm1

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Re: my new web site
« Reply #10 on: August 06, 2011, 08:46:17 am »
Ok, but there are a few spelling mistakes, loads of incorrect use of capital letters and missing punctuation, and some bad grammar.

gary999

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Re: my new web site
« Reply #11 on: August 06, 2011, 10:00:07 am »
its okay ,some minor alterations needed spelling mistakes
better pics etc ive seen a lot worse :)

peekeclean

  • Posts: 348
Re: my new web site
« Reply #12 on: August 06, 2011, 03:42:15 pm »
Thanks for all the input,thats why i ask you lot befor i start puting it on my adverts.

Seymour Sunshine

  • Posts: 207
Re: my new web site
« Reply #13 on: August 06, 2011, 04:01:39 pm »
Yes, the content is good and the layout is fine.

You seem to be using Capital Letters in Random places which makes is difficult to read.

There are a couple of grammatical errors as well.

* third floor (30ft) of properties are well as them those hard to reach skylights

* removing all moss, dirt and grim grime that builds up over time

* with minimal minimum fuss

* We clean all the glass botzah (?) inside and out as well ^as^ all frames
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peekeclean

  • Posts: 348
Re: my new web site
« Reply #14 on: August 07, 2011, 12:40:17 pm »
Ok had my wife change some things this morning, so now what do you think?
cheers joe