[Matt Gibson]

Hi guys,

just wanted to gauge a new flyer im thinking of putting together,

obviously my logo across the top,

then i was thinking something along the lines of,
''i noticed your driveways is a little dirty, i could have that looking great again for ________
 if you would like to take me up on the offer, dont hesitate to call me on ___________
 We also offer a wide range of other Pressure Cleaning services so please see overleaf and hopefully we
 can help you with whatever you need!''

or something abit more refined.

is that first part abit cheeky?
my OH said it was abit cheeky but if i got the flyer, id know my drive was dirty and have abit of a laugh.
i just thought it would be good to leave a space for a non generic quote, so they know what itll cost straight up.

or it could just be a load of carp thats always floating round my head..lol..

either way, let the comments begin..

cheers,

Matt

[Adam P]

i like the idea of being able to put prices on the leaflet for that exact property when you deliver, this was something i considered doing at one point and never got round to trying.

the only downside is you can't sell your services even more once you've given the price unless there is additionals you can sell once you've got the job e.g. protection etc?

spelling and grammer is poor and needs to be better, such as "i noticed your driveways is..." this should either be driveways are, or driveway is. plenty more of those so double check and then get 2/3 other people to do the same.

i'd say you could improve it by having an attention grabbing sentence, something like the price sentence being really big

"I could have your driveway looking great again for ______"


also perosnally  i think it's better to say I will rather then I could as it shows more confidence, but then maybe it's too pushy.

[Matt Gibson]

Yeah, obviously it would be proofed and whatnot, but i just dont want to come across rude by basically telling someone, ''your drive looks like rubbish'' lol

i figure that if you can get he price on there, and get a call back, they will see from the card that you offr say, patio, roof tiles etc so there is all that room for extras. Its just getting that call back. I think the ability to write the specific cost to a specific drive could be a good angle.

Has anyone else tried it?

coments?

cheers,

Matt

[Adam P]

ok well i'd say it's perhaps a bit cheeky and some wont like it,  i think some will and you've been fairly light hearted with it so think it's worth a try.

[Matt Gibson]

Yeah, thats what i thought, but then again, you will always get ppl who dont even look at it,or think your being smart telling em their drive is filthy.

ya win some ya lose some i guess.