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jasonl

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New web site please comment
« on: March 31, 2008, 08:50:38 pm »
Hi my new site is on its final draft, a few spellings to correct, does anyone have any errors thay can find?


www.disastermastersuk.co.uk   thanks
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I dry Buildings

dan roberts

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Re: New web site please comment
« Reply #1 on: March 31, 2008, 09:35:18 pm »
Hi, in my opinion its not the best, but depends if its a full time business or just beer money.
If its the latter then yes, I think it will do well.

Dan
Life moves pretty fast, if u dont stop and look around once in a while, u could miss it.

garyj

Re: New web site please comment
« Reply #2 on: March 31, 2008, 09:44:03 pm »
I would ditch the picture of you on the beach for a start.

garyj

Re: New web site please comment
« Reply #3 on: March 31, 2008, 09:51:57 pm »
Secondly, the links don't work. But still ditch the picture first.

dan roberts

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Re: New web site please comment
« Reply #4 on: March 31, 2008, 09:55:03 pm »
I agree, the beach picture doesnt work at all well with the 'I sympathise with your disaster' promise. It looks like you are spending their misery money on Thai Brides and Ping Pong Ball shows!!  ;D

Dan
Life moves pretty fast, if u dont stop and look around once in a while, u could miss it.

garyj

Re: New web site please comment
« Reply #5 on: March 31, 2008, 09:56:44 pm »
You're right Dan, there is that angle too.

I would just ditch it because he's ugly  ;D

jasonl

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Re: New web site please comment
« Reply #6 on: March 31, 2008, 10:06:04 pm »
Yes the picture is my honey moon in the maldives last month.... my "beer money" is a turnover of 800k in past 6 months lol.
I clean carpets
I dry Buildings

martin19842

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Re: New web site please comment
« Reply #7 on: March 31, 2008, 10:24:33 pm »
jason

i preferred the scirrocco website, i thought it was more crisp, more commercial.

but at the same time it depends what market you are aiming it at,

if you are targetting the domestic policyholder, it may well work, also good choice or website name, on the back of a certain tv series.

regards

martin