[Alex Wingrove]

hi

what's this like not anything special but just to stick through the letter boxes when canvassing, will make it into business card aswel

Thanks

[russ_clark]

You may want to do a spell check on it first Alex

[Dean Aspects]

Conservatory... i think!

Dean

[jampot]

i think that the design is godd, but, i think that there is toooooo much wording on it. you may find that you will get a better response if the was less text, like the design tho. 

dont just post knock the doors you"l get alot more 

trust me ive done it

[Alex Wingrove]

yeah i always do but this is for the ones that arnt in, havn't been out in ages and need to tidy a fee areas up,

what should i get rid of?

photoshop didn't spell check stupid thing!

[Paul Coleman]

hi

what's this like not anything special but just to stick through the letter boxes when canvassing, will make it into business card aswel

Thanks

Looks good to me Alex.  Straightforward and to the point is the best way to do it and you've achieved that.  I like the window cleaner logo on the left.

[jampot]

maybe make the cleaning part larger so the first things that you see is what you do. i would put the name and address alot smaller maybe at the bottom. make sure that what you do i bold and stands out so its the first thing they see.

less can somtimes mean more 

[Village Gleam]

I liked it, and I am usually very critical. I didn't think it was too wordy and made all the major selling points.

It also gave your name address and home number which inspires trust. I've got a comp name and people are forever asking what my name is and I have to waste words on my leaflet and call myself things like propietor(I do include my name etc).

[Paul Coleman]

Mine might be a bit wordy but I did it like that to exclude those who weren't serious about having a regular service.  I would rather have a smaller number of responses which are hopefully from customers who genuinely want what I'm offering.
Mine is nothing special either but seems to get responses.

[Alex Wingrove]

that looks nice paul i like the little logo,