[markybop]

Just quickly flung together a wee flyer.
It does look clearer/crisper when printed out on white card.
Wot u guys think?
How can I improve it?

[patman]

Hi.

I would make the logo very faint, so the text stands out more, to be honest as it is It puts me off reading it.

steve.

[Mike Halliday]

i think its easy to get sucked into a clever design but you need to ask yourself will it bring in anymore work than a simple leaflet that tells the customer everything they need to know without any frills.

I'm not a window cleaner but I always like to use an incentive for them to call eg;  £5 of your first clean

Mike

[vwm]

Just quickly flung together a wee flyer.

 

you said it lol not being funny but it looks like a cowboy flyer mate i would recomend making it like your sign writtin van so customers can see that you are a proper set up

sorry if i ahve afended you but you did say what we think

vwm

[markybop]

VWM is a family compainy run by Victor and Rowena Seogalutze.

 Started in 1995 by Mark then called MS window cleaning the buisness started to grow in and around the Bridport area. In 1999 due to moving out of the area, Victor his brother took over and the buisness changed name to VWM window cleaning  specialists. In 2005 the buisness started to grow again in the East Devon area to which we are cleaning there now for 5 days during our 5 weekly rota.

Since january 2007 VWM invested in 100% pure water cleaning technology and this has enabled us to provide a much better service and our customer base is increasing day by day.

What you can expect from us is a high quality, reliable, freindly, professional service who are fully insured.

While Victor is busy looking after all our customers, Rowena is busy in the office and will be happy to discuss your window cleaning needs.

At least I can spell mate......... it's BUSINESS..........

[Mike Halliday]

Mark, that sounds good, if you had a picture of Victor and Rowena Seogalutze. people could relate to what you are saying better.

people buy people and like to see who they are doing business with.

Mike

[vwm]

cheers mike pics going on soon as only been on web afew weeks now our 14 year old son done website for us and i havent had time to look over it fully

i think hes done a good job so far.

as for markybop if you dont like people's opinions then dont ask for them. i was just saying, that in 2 months canvassing a new area  with leaflets that look the same as my van i got over £5500 per year of work and the feedback from the customers was that the leaflet looked pro and when they saw the van about realised i wasnt a flyby night 
many bined leaflets like the ones u flung together so i think i will rest my case now

had 10000 made and still got over 8000 left over  that equals £2.75 per leaflet

ps cheers for the info on site

[vwm]

site checked over now thx feel it was a bit low to plaster someones mistakes on a forum just because you didnt like the opinion they gave but hey next time i will say what a brill design just to keep you happy.




ps how do u upload an image on here

[vwm]

as promised

[GPPrint]

FREE SIMPLE DESIGN

www.gpprint.co.uk

No seasonal sales just always low prices.

[markybop]

Go for it then!
Send us a free design for my company. Taa, Mark.