[Jasonc YSC]

Hi All!

Started up in June doing domestic cleaning, and am happy with how things are coming along

Have made a website but before I go and pay for a domain can you give me your opinions, or if you think i've missed anything let me know?

www.yellowstarcleaning.webeden.co.uk

Thanks,

Jason

[Neil Jones]

I like the content but it's all just text. Have you got a logo? Picture of your van or something associated with cleaning you can put on.

[Jasonc YSC]

Thank you for your reply, going to make some changes today.

Would appreciate your feedback.

Thanks,

Jason

[Andy_MK]

It's too wide. It should be able to auto size itself to my screen so the user does not have to scroll. Also get yourself a landline number, it does make a difference.

[Clever Forum Name]

Avoid flash if you can.

As I just viewed your site on my ipad

[Jasonc YSC]

Hi all, I'll adjust the size today and make it slimmer. Apart from the flash and the landline number (which is being looked into) any more suggestions. I'm gonna add some pictures and maybe change the background etc generally have a play about with it.

[johnny bravo]

yellow star to big and bright,       needs a bit of colour a couple of pics etc,  bigger writing so we can read it without squinting     lol

[newbroom]

Not sure you need a contact page when contact box appears on every page