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Sarah Sarill

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Re: How do i get commercial work ?
« Reply #80 on: January 05, 2006, 03:59:56 pm »
http://www.cleanitup.co.uk/smf/index.php?topic=14799.0

Hi guys,

Here is the link to the Documents to Download section where I have posted it.

Hope it helps,

Sarah

Sarah

Re: How do i get commercial work ?
« Reply #81 on: January 05, 2006, 05:07:28 pm »

If anyone makes any improvements to it let me know as I am always trying to make my communication better.

Sarah


... I am always attempting to improve my communication.

(I think I'm turning into MalcG.  Sorry)

smp cleaning

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Re: How do i get commercial work ?
« Reply #82 on: January 07, 2006, 08:13:26 pm »
Rich,  If you view my previous post titled 'Poaching commercial' you will see that I have just written a marketing letter just for the very same task.

My initial plan was to target a different business sector WEEKLY but have just received my first reply and now appreciate what follow-up work there is involved so am sending out batches and waiting a few weeks before I do another one.

Let me know if you want a copy as I am more than happy to send you one.

Finally I am just putting together a new quotation pack for the first reply which will form the next stage of the chain. 

So far I have written a letter draft to each of my existing commercial customers asking them to supply me a written testimonial for this quotation pack.  Again if you would like a copy just ask.

The next step is to revise my quotation letter content itself so have asked this forum for help (see my latest post for the details).

Its not instant but am taking  my time to do it professionally cos thats what I feel will render a positive result.

Hope this helps
 Sarill


mrkleen

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Re: How do i get commercial work ?
« Reply #83 on: January 08, 2006, 03:59:19 pm »
Send me a copy please just started up and need all the help i can get thanz spotless.w.c.s@btinternet.com

Sarah Sarill

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Re: How do i get commercial work ?
« Reply #84 on: January 08, 2006, 04:29:23 pm »
Hi Mr Klean,

The link to download a copy of the leter is in my last post above.

Hope it helps.

Sarah
Sarah

paul mac

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Re: How do i get commercial work ?
« Reply #85 on: January 09, 2006, 02:15:19 pm »
Rich,  If you view my previous post titled 'Poaching commercial' you will see that I have just written a marketing letter just for the very same task.

My initial plan was to target a different business sector WEEKLY but have just received my first reply and now appreciate what follow-up work there is involved so am sending out batches and waiting a few weeks before I do another one.

Let me know if you want a copy as I am more than happy to send you one.

Finally I am just putting together a new quotation pack for the first reply which will form the next stage of the chain. 

So far I have written a letter draft to each of my existing commercial customers asking them to supply me a written testimonial for this quotation pack.  Again if you would like a copy just ask.

The next step is to revise my quotation letter content itself so have asked this forum for help (see my latest post for the details).

Its not instant but am taking  my time to do it professionally cos thats what I feel will render a positive result.

Hope this helps
 Sarill


nelson

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Re: How do i get commercial work ?
« Reply #86 on: January 09, 2006, 02:47:02 pm »
if sarah or anyone else has copys of these letters could they send to me thanks ray
raynelson@talktalk.net

dougster

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Re: How do i get commercial work ?
« Reply #87 on: January 10, 2006, 01:18:06 pm »
is there any chance of any one who has copys, send me them also thanks very much
    dougies49@hotmail.com

P @ F

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Re: How do i get commercial work ?
« Reply #88 on: January 10, 2006, 06:18:19 pm »
Hi Sarah Sarill , only just noticed your reply on a previous page about your updated versions , i didnt look again as i thought it would only be other w/c's askin for a copy !
If you could mail me the updates it would be great , thanks .
And your right about the thread , it has turned out to be a proper biggun !

If your wondering how i got on with finding commercial , so far it aint happened , crazy i know but everything is going boobs up all the time , i had one of my vans nicked , then my remaining van decided to do my bank balance a bit of harm , this year should be better , i cant complain though about 2 years into the bussiness now and i have gone from a car and a B&Q ladder to 2 fully kitted out wfp vans .

  jibbers@blueyonder.co.uk

   Rich  P @ F  ;D


 
I'm so lazy I'm getting tired of it !

t.morris

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Re: How do i get commercial work ?
« Reply #89 on: January 11, 2006, 04:45:06 pm »
Hi can i have both copies aswell please thanks t.morris6090@ntlworld.com

kevstop70

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Re: How do i get commercial work ?
« Reply #90 on: January 25, 2006, 11:27:44 am »
Hi Steve & David,

Which one do you want a copy of ?  The Commercial Marketing letter or the Testimonial Request letter ?

I have forgotten who I sent copies of the canvassing letter too but am almost sure you have both had that one !!!

Let me know

Sarill

could you send me both letters please my email address is kevstop70@aol.com thank you   :)

kevstop70

  • Posts: 6
Re: How do i get commercial work ?
« Reply #91 on: January 25, 2006, 11:29:41 am »
Hi Steve & David,

Which one do you want a copy of ?  The Commercial Marketing letter or the Testimonial Request letter ?

I have forgotten who I sent copies of the canvassing letter too but am almost sure you have both had that one !!!

Let me know

Sarill

could you send me both letters please my email address is kevstop70@aol.com thank you   :)

kevstop70

  • Posts: 6
Re: How do i get commercial work ?
« Reply #92 on: January 25, 2006, 11:36:05 am »
As my Q  says , but i dont know how to best go about it , help me please , i want to earn bigger money .

  Rich   P @ F   ;D
could you please send me a copy of the information sarall sent you on increasing the size of your business through commercial work my email address is kevstop70@aol.com thanks

Sarah Sarill

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Re: How do i get commercial work ?
« Reply #93 on: January 25, 2006, 03:52:36 pm »
Hi guys,

I have posted the letter so you can download it.  Click on the link below and just cut and paste it onto your own letterheads.

http://www.cleanitup.co.uk/smf/index.php?topic=14799.0

Hope it helps,

Sarah
Sarah

cameron

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Re: How do i get commercial work ?
« Reply #94 on: January 31, 2006, 11:47:45 am »
Hi sarah,
I expect that your fed up with people asking by now but is there Any chance you could send me a copy of your commercial letter, testimonial request and and quote pack please?
regards
cameron




Moderator David@stives

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Re: How do i get commercial work ?
« Reply #95 on: January 31, 2006, 12:21:50 pm »
me too please   :-*

Sarah Sarill

  • Posts: 1537
Re: How do i get commercial work ?
« Reply #96 on: January 31, 2006, 02:57:52 pm »
 ;D ::)

What can a girl do eh ??
Sarah

Re: How do i get commercial work ?
« Reply #97 on: January 31, 2006, 05:24:08 pm »
Guys/Gals,

It's in the documents to upload section.

Take a look there, there's loads of other goodies there too.

I'm going to lock this thread now.