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jasonl

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Printed off 454 letters today
« on: November 29, 2010, 07:15:48 pm »
This is the one I sent to Nursing and care homes...... Now I will be signing them all night

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I clean carpets
I dry Buildings

Jon Tabbener

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Re: Printed off 454 letters today
« Reply #1 on: December 01, 2010, 10:30:29 am »
Has that letter worked for you before then Jason -

That little lot will cost you about £200 + to print & post - i suppose 1 job will cover that
Cleaner Carpets

jasonl

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Re: Printed off 454 letters today
« Reply #2 on: December 02, 2010, 08:29:22 am »
Yes  got 6% return last time , which is good , it looks better on the printed page , it was written by a copywriter.

The headline    DIRTY, SMELLY CARPETS?

Is in bold , the words , "dirty, smelly" poke out in the bottom of the window , which is designed to awaken peoples curiosity , and from the feedback recieved it was a factor in people opening the letter.

The letter to lettings agents has the bold headline "good commission to be made"

you can see the words "good commission" in the window , which obviously gets the lettings agents going
I clean carpets
I dry Buildings

cannon

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Re: Printed off 454 letters today
« Reply #3 on: January 07, 2011, 05:06:08 pm »
Hi Jason

Is there any chance you could email me this letter so i can see how its laid out, this is the type of work im looking for and really going to push this year.

Many thanks

Karl@carpetcleaners-sunderland.co.uk

jasonl

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Re: Printed off 454 letters today
« Reply #4 on: January 13, 2011, 04:41:10 pm »
Has that letter worked for you before then Jason -

That little lot will cost you about £200 + to print & post - i suppose 1 job will cover that

I aim to do double that every month this year , I get a 4-1 return immediately cash wish , the repeat business is where it is at.
I clean carpets
I dry Buildings

suffolkclean

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Re: Printed off 454 letters today
« Reply #5 on: January 22, 2011, 06:53:53 pm »
Hi Jason - just wondered how many out of the 454 letters became work for you now we're near end Jan? Did you post them all 1st class?
Thanks
Barbara

MattP

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Re: Printed off 454 letters today
« Reply #6 on: January 27, 2011, 04:22:10 pm »
Hi Jason
Sounds like a good idea to me and well thought out.  Could I be so cheeky to ask if you could send me any samples of letters.  I'm just starting out and could do with some pointers and would be very appreciative.

My eamil is matt.pocock73@gmail.com

Many thanks

Matt