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Title: Commercial Canvass Letter - wfp
Post by: Sarah Sarill on January 02, 2006, 10:57:17 am
Have put together this letter using bits taken from some samples I have been sent from members of this forum. 

Extract any bits you like or use is as is but whichever I hope it yields some results for you in 2006.

Kind Regards,

Sarah  ;)
Title: Re: Commercial Canvass Letter - wfp
Post by: G & M on January 03, 2006, 10:54:12 pm
Thanks Sarah you're a star.-Michael
Title: Re: Commercial Canvass Letter - wfp
Post by: williamx on February 24, 2006, 04:14:12 pm
Many Thanks Sarah

Just got my 1st contract "£175 every 6 weeks" using you letter ;D
Title: Re: Commercial Canvass Letter - wfp
Post by: Sarah Sarill on February 24, 2006, 04:27:44 pm
My pleasure,

I might have some further luck with it myself - just waiting for written confirmation from a local company for £1100 of work every quarter.  Fingers crossed, was a lot of hard work as they wanted written risk assessments for each job included with the quotation.

The odd thing is that I sent this letter out with our portfolio last October and its been sat on our contacts desk since.  She had one complaint about the current w/c and presto, we have a chance.

The content and format seems to be working quite well for quite a few and its nice to hear some feedback.

Hope its the first of many for you   ;)

Sarah
Title: Re: Commercial Canvass Letter - wfp
Post by: robbie14000 on May 07, 2006, 01:41:39 pm
Sarah - Thanks for the letters they have come in very useful.
Robbie-Clearshine- Harrogate
Title: Re: Commercial Canvass Letter - wfp
Post by: Sarah Sarill on May 07, 2006, 02:26:39 pm
Have you had a return with then Robbie or are you just about to send them out ?

Sarah
Title: Re: Commercial Canvass Letter - wfp
Post by: robbie14000 on November 17, 2006, 01:45:15 pm
Sarah- soory it,s taken so long to answer missed your post.
We have picked up 2 hotels with trhe above letter
Thanks Robbie
Title: Re: Commercial Canvass Letter - wfp
Post by: East coast window cleaning Services on May 03, 2007, 10:45:17 pm
send me a copy

Cheers

Rickywolstencroft@hotmail.com
Title: Re: Commercial Canvass Letter - wfp
Post by: collins ReVive Stoneworks on May 04, 2007, 04:44:45 pm
Sarah

Could you send Us a copy

many thanks

karl Collins
Title: Re: Commercial Canvass Letter - wfp
Post by: CHARLEY B on May 04, 2007, 06:15:11 pm
Hi
Would you send me a copy aswell please.
Many thanks .

CharleyB
Title: Re: Commercial Canvass Letter - wfp
Post by: Matthew Speakman on May 04, 2007, 08:57:15 pm
i'm about to buy WFP gear so a copy would be grand.

e.c.s.1@btinternet.com

Thank you very much!!!
Title: Re: Commercial Canvass Letter - wfp
Post by: pete41 on May 05, 2007, 11:49:22 am
can you please send me a copy ? many thanks pete
Title: Re: Commercial Canvass Letter - wfp
Post by: Sarah Sarill on May 05, 2007, 07:10:30 pm
Hi all,

I dont know where the letter went but it was originally posted in my opening post  >:(

Let me know how you get on.  :)

Sarah
Title: Re: Commercial Canvass Letter - wfp
Post by: CHARLEY B on May 06, 2007, 12:52:32 pm
Thanks sarah

got the letter great.

CHARLEYB
Title: Re: Commercial Canvass Letter - wfp
Post by: PremierPDS on May 07, 2007, 08:59:07 pm
Hi Sarah

I'm a little confused  ??? Is the letter about the window cleaning or cleaning in general? Can you send me a copy please- nickie1105@msn.com

Nickie x
Title: Re: Commercial Canvass Letter - wfp
Post by: Sarah Sarill on May 08, 2007, 07:31:04 am
Hi Nickie.

The above letter is specific to Window Cleaning and the Working at Heights Directive.

You are more than welcome to  use is format and wording to pull together one for your industry but its impact does come from the fact companies are responsible for their on-site contractors safety when working at heights, although I would assume that would relate to other kinds of safety issues.

Try looking on the HSE website for guidance - perhaps you will find a hook specific to your business.

Kind regards,

Sarah
Title: Re: Commercial Canvass Letter - wfp
Post by: mr klean on May 10, 2007, 04:48:27 pm
Hi am a complete newbie to this and just wondered how a get a copy of your canvas letter  ???

Many thanks
Dave   
Title: Re: Commercial Canvass Letter - wfp
Post by: Sarah Sarill on May 10, 2007, 06:50:31 pm
Hello dave and welcome to CleanItUp ;)

Are you seeing the letter I posted in my last but one post above or are you seeing a square with a red cross in it ?

Sarah
Title: Re: Commercial Canvass Letter - wfp
Post by: specialised on May 19, 2007, 11:18:51 pm
hi sarah

can you send me a copy

robertshaw0111@hotmail.com
Title: Re: Commercial Canvass Letter - wfp
Post by: mr klean on May 23, 2007, 09:13:47 am
Hi Sarah

Many thanks got the letter, am new to this and could,nt see how to print it off,

Dave
Title: Re: Commercial Canvass Letter - wfp
Post by: jayowen on May 28, 2007, 02:30:14 pm
HI SARAH COULD YOU PLEASE SEND ME THE LETTER.

LIGHTHOUSE_WINDOWS@HOTMAIL.CO.UK

MANY THANKS JAY
Title: Re: Commercial Canvass Letter - wfp
Post by: archercleaningserv on May 29, 2007, 02:48:34 pm
Hi sarah ,
could you please send me a copy of the letter if its not too much trouble & it will be much appreciated ,

many thanks , chris

archerwindowcleaning@yahoo.co.uk
Title: Re: Commercial Canvass Letter - wfp
Post by: letzclean on May 30, 2007, 10:34:58 pm



Hi Sarah,
              Could you send me a copy of the letter please.   cleenco@london.com





Kind regards
James
Title: Re: Commercial Canvass Letter - wfp
Post by: Nicko on June 02, 2007, 05:42:46 pm
Hi Sarah,

Could you please send me a copy also?

Many Thanks
Title: Re: Commercial Canvass Letter - wfp
Post by: Sarah Sarill on June 13, 2007, 05:22:13 pm
Hi guys,

Sorry for the delay in replying -Ive been off-line for a while.

The letter is actually posted in one of my posts above.  Can you see it or are you seeing a small box with a red cross inside it ?

You will have to retype it and paste it into your own letterhead.

Sarah
Title: Re: Commercial Canvass Letter - wfp
Post by: Trevor Knight on June 22, 2007, 01:26:10 pm
Hi Sarah,

Please can you provide me with a link as to where you gained this information so if a client questions this I can provide the website address

Many thanks.

Trevor
Title: Re: Commercial Canvass Letter - wfp
Post by: Sarah Sarill on June 22, 2007, 05:03:03 pm
Hi Trevor,

The generic HSE stuff was borrowed from other posters leaflets and letters and the info about the Savoy prosecution was taken from an article in the Professional Window Cleaner Magazine. 

Hers's a  link to the same question

http://www.cleanitup.co.uk/smf/index.php?topic=18581.0

Hope that helps

Sarah
Title: Re: Commercial Canvass Letter - wfp
Post by: Trevor Knight on June 25, 2007, 10:51:02 am
Thanks for that Sarah, thats excellent.

Cheers Trevor
Title: Re: Commercial Canvass Letter - wfp
Post by: dg-cleaning on June 25, 2007, 08:02:56 pm
sarah please could I have a copy also?many thanks xx
Title: Re: Commercial Canvass Letter - wfp
Post by: jay foden on August 16, 2007, 11:35:05 am
hi can you send me a letter please,
Title: Re: Commercial Canvass Letter - wfp
Post by: Neil_A on October 13, 2007, 05:43:28 pm
Am i the only person that can see the copy of the letter in one of sarahs posts   ???
Title: Re: Commercial Canvass Letter - wfp
Post by: geefree on October 19, 2007, 06:39:13 pm
can see it.. and i transferred it to microsoft word, but was unable to make any changes to it.

Gary
Title: Re: Commercial Canvass Letter - wfp
Post by: smartez on October 27, 2007, 11:39:42 pm
can you pliz email me this canvass letter my email is   smartezlimited@yahoo.co.uk.    Thanks you are a star
Title: Re: Commercial Canvass Letter - wfp
Post by: adie585 on October 29, 2007, 04:22:56 pm
hi sarah, could i have a copy please,

apwindowcleaning@hotmail.com
Title: Re: Commercial Canvass Letter - wfp
Post by: sglods on November 17, 2007, 01:04:49 pm
please could you send me a copy as well please . sglods@hotmail.co.uk
Title: Re: Commercial Canvass Letter - wfp
Post by: drive surgeon on November 18, 2007, 01:51:00 pm
where is this letter i cant see it? ???
Title: Re: Commercial Canvass Letter - wfp
Post by: rudieb on December 12, 2007, 10:19:37 am
Hi sarah

Can you perhaps send me a copy too?

Regards
Rudie
Title: Re: Commercial Canvass Letter - wfp
Post by: Stardust Cleaning Services on December 14, 2007, 02:22:57 pm
Hi Sarah
Please can you send me a copy of the letter.
Many thanks
Have a great Christmas & new year
Steve
stardustcleaning@fsmail.net
Title: Re: Commercial Canvass Letter - wfp
Post by: London and Essex on December 18, 2007, 02:17:29 pm
Would appreciate the opportunity to have a copy if possible please.
Title: Re: Commercial Canvass Letter - wfp
Post by: Martin-Swinscoe on December 18, 2007, 06:45:04 pm
Would appreciate the opportunity to have a copy if possible please.

Me too sarah  ;)

MJSwindowcleaner@aol.com
Title: Re: Commercial Canvass Letter - wfp
Post by: poleman on December 18, 2007, 07:24:13 pm
HELLO

Seek and you will find?

http://www.cleanitup.co.uk/smf/index.php?action=dlattach;topic=14799.0;id=6446 
Title: Re: Commercial Canvass Letter - wfp
Post by: rhys11 on December 20, 2007, 02:08:23 am
hi can you send me a copy plz
rhysaharries@hotmail.com
Title: Re: Commercial Canvass Letter - wfp
Post by: martinhowes on February 01, 2008, 08:44:01 pm
Have put together this letter using bits taken from some samples I have been sent from members of this forum. 

Extract any bits you like or use is as is but whichever I hope it yields some results for you in 2006.

Kind Regards,

Sarah  ;)can you send me a copy of your letter please
m_howes1@sky.com thanks
Title: Re: Commercial Canvass Letter - wfp
Post by: klinger (spa clean) on February 09, 2008, 01:01:50 pm
neilbate@hotmail.co.uk       I,d be grateful for a copy too thnks
Title: Re: Commercial Canvass Letter - wfp
Post by: myvanwi on February 11, 2008, 07:00:50 pm
My pleasure,

I might have some further luck with it myself - just waiting for written confirmation from a local company for £1100 of work every quarter.  Fingers crossed, was a lot of hard work as they wanted written risk assessments for each job included with the quotation.

The odd thing is that I sent this letter out with our portfolio last October and its been sat on our contacts desk since.  She had one complaint about the current w/c and presto, we have a chance.

The content and format seems to be working quite well for quite a few and its nice to hear some feedback.
Sarah,
Could you send us a copy please to  houseproudcleaning@btinternet.com  Thanks

Hope its the first of many for you   ;)

Sarah
Title: Re: Commercial Canvass Letter - wfp
Post by: Go Clean East on February 20, 2008, 11:50:34 am
Hi Sarah,

Im very interested in seeing this letter you have put together. Would it be possible for you to send me a copy please, it would be a great help.

Best regards

Craig

cclark@gocleaning.co.uk
Title: Re: Commercial Canvass Letter - wfp
Post by: rhys11 on February 22, 2008, 11:11:37 pm
Have put together this letter using bits taken from some samples I have been sent from members of this forum. 

Extract any bits you like or use is as is but whichever I hope it yields some results for you in 2006.

Kind Regards,

Sarah  ;)


Sarah

Could you send Us a copy

many thanks

rhys

rhysaharries@hotmail.com
Title: Re: Commercial Canvass Letter - wfp
Post by: JSMC on February 23, 2008, 06:25:07 pm
might as well ge tin on it

whiteroom10@hotmail.com
Title: Re: Commercial Canvass Letter - wfp
Post by: mr klean on March 15, 2008, 01:29:47 pm
hi Sarah

Could you please send me a copy,
 
mrklean@hotmail.co.uk

many thanks
Dave
Title: Re: Commercial Canvass Letter - wfp
Post by: kevinjsexton on March 28, 2008, 12:06:15 am
please miss can I have one too? just starting out. Thanks

kevinjsexton@aol.com
Title: Re: Commercial Canvass Letter - wfp
Post by: cjultra on April 02, 2008, 06:38:34 pm
Sarah, thanks for putting this up on here. Could you send any helpful paperwork to:  cjultra@aol.com
Title: Re: Commercial Canvass Letter - wfp
Post by: PaulineH on April 08, 2008, 07:36:39 pm
Hi Sarah

Could you send me a copy as well please

Thanks in advance.....Pauline

hayesdap@hotmail.com
Title: Re: Commercial Canvass Letter - wfp
Post by: david bull on June 03, 2008, 10:35:09 am
hi sarah could you send me one at davidhbulley@yahoo.co.uk thanks and all the best
Title: Re: Commercial Canvass Letter - wfp
Post by: paul D long on June 03, 2008, 07:01:41 pm
Hi Sarah could i have one please pretty please ;D alwaysbettercleaning@sky.com
Title: Re: Commercial Canvass Letter - wfp
Post by: Silvahands on June 06, 2008, 06:17:41 pm
Hi Sarah,

As I am starting my new business I am looking for as much usefull info as I can get and threfore would really appreciate if you could send me a copy.

Thanks in advance,

Tony

tony@silverhands.com
Title: Re: Commercial Canvass Letter - wfp
Post by: Meadow on June 20, 2008, 12:19:10 pm
Hi Sarah

Please could I have a copy?

Thank you

Bob

Info@MeadowHygiene.com

Title: Re: Commercial Canvass Letter - wfp
Post by: trabar on July 07, 2008, 07:45:55 pm
My pleasure,

I might have some further luck with it myself - just waiting for written confirmation from a local company for £1100 of work every quarter.  Fingers crossed, was a lot of hard work as they wanted written risk assessments for each job included with the quotation.

The odd thing is that I sent this letter out with our portfolio last October and its been sat on our contacts desk since.  She had one complaint about the current w/c and presto, we have a chance.

The content and format seems to be working quite well for quite a few and its nice to hear some feedback.

Hope its the first of many for you   ;)

Sarah
Title: Re: Commercial Canvass Letter - wfp
Post by: steve m on July 09, 2008, 08:06:12 am
Hi Sarah could you send me a copy of your letter as well please

cleanaglaze@hotmail.co.uk

many thanks

steve
Title: Re: Commercial Canvass Letter - wfp
Post by: richywilts on July 12, 2008, 04:40:30 pm
HI SARAH

IT SOUNDS QUITE SUCCESSFUL THIS LETTER OF YOURS COULD YOU SEND IT TO ME PLEASE TO richardwiltshire36@yahoo.co.uk

CHEERS
Title: Re: Commercial Canvass Letter - wfp
Post by: seandyer2003 on August 10, 2008, 04:27:00 pm
can i have a copy please??

seandyer2003@yahoo.co.uk

Thanks
Title: Re: Commercial Canvass Letter - wfp
Post by: rhys11 on August 10, 2008, 08:47:52 pm
Have put together this letter using bits taken from some samples I have been sent from members of this forum. 

Extract any bits you like or use is as is but whichever I hope it yields some results for you in 2006.

Kind Regards,

Sarah  ;)


Sarah

Could you send Us a copy

many thanks

rhys

rhysaharries@hotmail.com
Title: Re: Commercial Canvass Letter - wfp
Post by: SandraR on August 11, 2008, 02:52:38 pm
Hi Sarah,

I've just joined the forum and would appreciate a copy of your canvassing letter for commercial cleaning.

thanks and best wishes,

Sandra R

sandyriz@hotmail.com
Title: Re: Commercial Canvass Letter - wfp
Post by: sean.w.c.s on August 24, 2008, 08:23:51 pm
Hi Sarah

would it be possible to have a copy of your letter please-sounds like a good one

thanks

donna

seandonna@tesco.net
Title: Re: Commercial Canvass Letter - wfp
Post by: mar08as on August 25, 2008, 02:58:11 pm
Have put together this letter using bits taken from some samples I have been sent from members of this forum. 

Extract any bits you like or use is as is but whichever I hope it yields some results for you in 2006.

Kind Regards,

Sarah  ;)


Hi Sarah,

Could send me a copy of your letters.

Thanks,

Alex

alex@sgw-propertysolutions.com
Title: Re: Commercial Canvass Letter - wfp
Post by: cleancarenw on September 02, 2008, 01:45:32 pm
Hi I'm new on the block with all of this, but looking though found your post.   Do you still have a copy.  Would appreciate a bit of help (well lot of help).
Thanks  Heather     can you e mail to: enquiries@cleancarenw.co.uk
Title: Re: Commercial Canvass Letter - wfp
Post by: allstar homecare on October 01, 2008, 06:45:16 pm
please could you send me one too and thanks in advance ........ jason@allstarhomecare.co.uk
Title: Re: Commercial Canvass Letter - wfp
Post by: Chris Galloway on October 02, 2008, 04:47:36 pm
A copy would be really appreciated, if you would be so kind

info@gallowayswindowcleaning.co.uk

regards.

Chris.
Title: Re: Commercial Canvass Letter - wfp
Post by: everlast on October 13, 2008, 05:36:59 pm
hi sarah could ypu also please send me a coppy everlastcleaningservices@hotmail.co.uk
Title: Re: Commercial Canvass Letter - wfp
Post by: Mo on October 14, 2008, 05:07:46 pm
please could you send me one too and thanks in advance  ;D


Mo 8)
Title: Re: Commercial Canvass Letter - wfp
Post by: Mo on October 14, 2008, 05:10:08 pm
please could you send me one too and thanks in advance  ;D
tealotacorontero@hotmailcom


Mo 8)
Title: Re: Commercial Canvass Letter - wfp
Post by: rinserite on October 15, 2008, 03:06:11 pm
Can you please send me a copy of the letter please, thanks terry
Title: Re: Commercial Canvass Letter - wfp
Post by: jayclean on October 16, 2008, 08:55:56 pm
Please could you send me a copy please james.bcarter@btinternet.com  thank you
Title: Re: Commercial Canvass Letter - wfp
Post by: lindsey74 on October 30, 2008, 06:56:40 pm
hi could you send me one please,thanx lindsey.rock1@ntlworld.com
Title: Re: Commercial Canvass Letter - wfp
Post by: Selectcleaning on November 04, 2008, 11:35:07 pm
Please will you send me a copy of the letter. Thanks very much in advance and my apologies for keeping the topic going.

Thanks again.

Cherie  cherie@selecthomeclean.co.uk
Title: Re: Commercial Canvass Letter - wfp
Post by: adie585 on November 05, 2008, 05:00:53 pm
yes plese could i have  a look too. apwindowcleaning@hotmail.com
Title: Re: Commercial Canvass Letter - wfp
Post by: CarPete Cleaning on November 07, 2008, 04:21:44 pm
Hi Sarah,

Could you please send your commercial canvas letter to me also.
Thanks in advance.
Pete

pete@carpetecleaning.com
Title: Re: Commercial Canvass Letter - wfp
Post by: daz34zler on December 09, 2008, 04:35:24 pm
could you send me a copy please.....thanks in advance
d.a.z.z.l.e.r@hotmail.com
Title: Re: Commercial Canvass Letter - wfp
Post by: rhys11 on January 15, 2009, 11:16:01 am
hi

can you send me it please
many thanks
rhys

rhysaharries@hotmail.com
Title: Re: Commercial Canvass Letter - wfp
Post by: stuart padbury on January 20, 2009, 01:23:59 am
hi sarah am new to this site am hopeing to set an office cleaning business
in the sudbury/halstead area would it be poss to send me a copy of ur letter
please stuart@thepadburys.co.uk
would be greatfull for any help


thanks stuart
Title: Re: Commercial Canvass Letter - wfp
Post by: lj domestics on January 21, 2009, 05:42:32 pm
hi, could i poss have a copy of your letter please as i am trying to break into commercial cleaning as well as the domestic cleaning that im already doing, thanks inadvance for any help.  lizzie.   crazymoome@aol.com
Title: Re: Commercial Canvass Letter - wfp
Post by: steven842 on January 25, 2009, 01:46:28 am
Hi could you please send me it as well .

regards steve

fifewindowcleaning@hotmail.co.uk
Title: Re: Commercial Canvass Letter - wfp
Post by: gordonswindows on January 29, 2009, 07:47:40 pm
Hey Sarah  how you doing

It is very generous of you to share such hard work

Can I too have a copy please

Thanks

Gordon

gordon@gordonsofperth.com
Title: Re: Commercial Canvass Letter - wfp
Post by: fccleaning on February 04, 2009, 10:33:24 am
Hi Sarah - we're new to this forum lark and husband is totally computer illiterate so it's down to me!  I would be very interested in getting a copy of your letter, as we're moving into the commercial area, but I can't work out how to access it.  Would be very grateful of some help.

Thanks

Miriam
fccleaning
Title: Re: Commercial Canvass Letter - wfp
Post by: rhys11 on February 05, 2009, 09:28:31 am
Have put together this letter using bits taken from some samples I have been sent from members of this forum. 

Extract any bits you like or use is as is but whichever I hope it yields some results for you in 2006.

Kind Regards,

Sarah  ;)


Sarah

Could you send Us a copy

many thanks

rhys

rhysaharries@hotmail.com
Title: Re: Commercial Canvass Letter - wfp
Post by: charlady on February 15, 2009, 09:46:33 pm
Hi Sarah,
I'm just starting out, could you send me a copy of this letter.
lesleycowie@fsmail.net
Many thanks
Lesley
Title: Re: Commercial Canvass Letter - wfp
Post by: lowestoft cleaning on March 04, 2009, 06:36:07 pm
Have put together this letter using bits taken from some samples I have been sent from members of this forum. 

Extract any bits you like or use is as is but whichever I hope it yields some results for you in 2006.

Kind Regards,

Sarah  ;)


hi sarah could you send me a copy please lowclean@hotmail.com    many thanks.
Title: Re: Commercial Canvass Letter - wfp
Post by: paneless on March 23, 2009, 10:57:51 am
Have you had a return with then Robbie or are you just about to send them out ?

Sarah

hi sarah could you please email me a copy of your commercial canvas letter my email address risdale@blueyonder.co.uk
thanks would be grateful paul
Title: Re: Commercial Canvass Letter - wfp
Post by: bertie 1967 on April 13, 2009, 11:31:17 pm
Hi Sarah,
I'm just starting out, could you send me a copy of this letter.
Title: Re: Commercial Canvass Letter - wfp
Post by: marcusjoseph1978 on April 15, 2009, 11:05:43 pm
Hi Sarah,
              I too am just starting out. I would be most grateful if you could send me a copy of the above named letter to me at my e-mail address: marcusjoseph1978@yahoo.co.uk

Thankyou so much in advance

Kind Regards

Marcus. ;)
Title: Re: Commercial Canvass Letter - wfp
Post by: Ricky M on April 19, 2009, 10:39:53 pm
go on then flower lets have butchers ability1@btinternet.com

mucho mucho
Title: Re: Commercial Canvass Letter - wfp
Post by: matsibley on April 21, 2009, 12:44:56 am
any chance u could grace me with a copy
thanx new start up
matsibley@hotmail.co.uk
Title: Re: Commercial Canvass Letter - wfp
Post by: David williams on April 21, 2009, 09:39:34 am
Hi Sarah
Could you please email me a copy?
david.williams17@hotmail.co.uk
Thanks alot
David
Title: Re: Commercial Canvass Letter - wfp
Post by: WCE on April 21, 2009, 12:50:31 pm
Just to let you know Sarah hasn't been on the forum since last June ;)
Title: Re: Commercial Canvass Letter - wfp
Post by: a900 on May 15, 2009, 01:05:58 pm
Please can you email me a copy to a900@hotmail.co.uk
Title: Re: Commercial Canvass Letter - wfp
Post by: Moderator David@stives on May 18, 2009, 05:05:42 pm
Sarah has now gone so she cant reply

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